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on July 15, 2009

I couldn't figure out why Kaida and Fudo look so young in panel 4. Maybe it's because their eyes are wide and I forgot her lipstick. :-/ In any case, I liked the look of it overall, so I didn't try to fix it. Maybe it can be construed as a symbolic throwback or something. In panel 5, I considered having Fudo say "I love you," but somehow this was more meaningful. I believe these words are spoken far less frequently. Kaida's response was originally "Rot in hell," but that didn't really work, imo. Rotting is more graphic than burning but not typical of hell imagery (and Kaida had to say hell).

Oh, and Raidon isn't particularly tall. I was just having my usual proportion problems. :-P

ghostrunner: The ugly green and yellow kitchen is clashing.

blntmaker: Kaida always carries a gun. (A lady has to defend herself. ;-) )

Tantz: This probably doesn't count as meaningful conversation.

n_y_japlander: You bet!

Peipei: Indeed. Kaida despises him.

LanceDanger: It burns!

amanda: Nah. He supports the local economy. ~_^

trevor: My sister raves about how nice Perth is. It's winter now, so it might be bearable, but I hate heat. I'd rather go to Alaska or Finland.

kyupol: My guess is that you set the bookmark on a page I have deleted. I delete all the filler after a week or so. (My last filler page was just before 726.) Try to "set" the bookmark on a different page, and see if it works.