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usedbooks

on Nov. 4, 2009

I'm not crazy about panel 1, but I enjoy the rest of this page, so lets pretend it doesn't exist. :-P No worries. I am aware of what sucks in that panel and have applied my lessons to future pages. A failure learned from is a success.

Originally I wanted to fit in Mike commenting about "plan B," but I couldn't work it into the script. Plus, it seemed more true to character to have him run off without a word.

Warpedwenger: Thanks.

ghostrunner: Heh. At four, I didn't even have a water gun! I had to go out and buy my own toy gun when I was older, so I could play spies.

roycemarie: That would be a strange role for Seiko indeed! XD

patrick & JNP: I thought that, but I didn't mention it, because I was hoping it was just me. :X I liked the page otherwise, but if that was distracting enough to warrant commentary, I consider it a failure. Back to the drawing board.

Peipei: Flightless armed bird. ~_^

Tantz: Nah. She was way off the mark.

amanda: That's a bad habit! Go get a manicure. ;-)

Jonko & DAJB: You never heard of a Shotgun Finch? XD