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usedbooks

on April 28, 2010

For those who may have forgotten, the keys came from here.

Originally, I hadn't scripted any dialogue for this page, which made it moody, but it set the wrong mood. It made Seiko seem too sure of herself. While she is determined, I felt it was important to script out the thinking here to show her motives. As always, the quest is for answers not really "rescue" at this point.

–Eep. I just realized I used the less common spelling of "recognize." Since I already changed this page four times, I'm leaving it. (I'll pretend it's a deliberate nod to my sister, who is visiting London. ~_^ )

ghostrunner: Not quite. ;)

DAJB: Sort of, though possibly unintentional.

blntmaker: The keys aren't from him, and it seems he might not have recognized them. Sometimes they get lucky.

Tantz: Thanks! There are a lot of inner musings for the next few pages that weren't in my original script, but they really hold everything together, imo.

amanda: Raidon's decor is always fun to research and draw. XD He likely wouldn't "plant" car keys on her, since she has no license. I mean, it could happen, but these are Celes's keys.

Peipei: She already had the keys but didn't come with a car or anything, so Raidon had no real reason to confiscate them I guess. (Apparently doesn't recognize his own keys…)

JNP: I didn't deliberately change anything but nose shapes. ^_^; So, it's interesting that other things have changed unconsciously… Men always get caught. Poor fellas. At least ladies are polite not to point it out. XD

LanceDanger: The phone maybe, but the keys are luck.