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Another Sunrise

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on July 21, 2010

I'm excited to present the conclusion chapter for a lot of plotlines, well over a year. If you just count this single night in UB time, it has gone on for nine (going on ten) chapters. Isn't it nice to see the sun again? ^_^

This particular page wasn't in my original script. It came about in a rewrite. I debated its inclusion so much, I consulted two plotting experts for advice – and got outvoted (my vote was cast for impatience and laziness, of course). So, you can thank JustNoPoint and Tantz for this page's existence and an extra thumbs-up to Tantz for giving me advice on tweaking the angles and dialogue (while I know I don't do perspective well yet, I am proud to be bolder in attempting it).

Anubis: She never stops, does she?

Tantz: You can be sure the hospital staff are adept at handling all kinds of trauma. Seems pretty common in this city.

Peipei: Unfortunately, a lot of guys (and others) don't acknowledge when something is wrong. Like if you feel dizzy, you shrug it off until you actually fall over.

DAJB: Alas, even the best multi-taskers can't be in two places at once!

amanda: Close. There are other others upon whom checking is required.

Jonko: Don't worry. They can handle things without Seiko. She has other matters to deal with and would be useless at the hospital. (There's no more helpless feeling than sitting in a waiting room, hoping for news.)