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usedbooks

on Jan. 5, 2011

I dialed back the violence for this whole scene, mostly for "realism" but also just as a spur of the moment idea change. Originally it was supposed to be a show of strength and one-upmanship ending with Brad either tackling or flipping Brandon to the ground, but now he subdues him in a… subdued way. It gives it a different spin all together, but I like it this way.

ghostrunner & Tantz: Thanks. ^_^ I thought I'd brighten things up a bit for 2011, matches the story mood too (for now, anyway).

Peipei: Sucker punching your brother probably doesn't count you as a "real man." XD But, yeah, it could be worse.