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usedbooks

on Feb. 9, 2011

I got nostalgic writing this scene. Ah, college. I also had fun playing with the dialogue/thought arrangement and pacing. I didn't have a visual draft for this page. I had one, but I wasn't "feeling it," so I tossed it aside and jumped in. It actually looks okay, imo.

Anubis: Nah. Seiko isn't one to heed good advice.

Warpedwenger: Thanks, for both of those things. :)

patrickdevine & Peipei: The explanation was lost when I changed the dialogue, but ultimately, I decided it was more natural for Seiko not to ask. She might already know the reason (making donations is likely), or she might assume he'll make something up, and/or she is overcompensating for her own motives cover-up and doesn't want to arouse suspicion of her suspicion.

ghostrunner: Merci beaucoup!

DAJB: True.

LanceDanger: That's because bad intentions lead nowhere. :)