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usedbooks

on Nov. 15, 2011

You'll notice that neither Dozer nor Meredith express much concern for their fallen companion. Dozer is a textbook sociopath, so he's pretty much concerned for his loss of a gadget. He also basically never takes action and is strictly tech and intelligence. Meredith actually doesn't like Raidon at all and could actually be enjoying this little folly.
 
This might be the most dialogue-heavy page I've churned out in a while. It was basically scripted as two pages, but it felt like a page and a half. Rather than abbreviating or drawing things out, I just squeezed it all into one page as written. :P

Anubis: Basically. Bridge Street is the "bad part of town" where Eric is developing a community center. This party is meant to raise funds for the project.

Lonnehart: So it appears he does. (His plans aren't always that great – nor do they work.)

ghostrunner: Would helping Raidon be the stupid thing he's not supposed to do?

plymayer: Thanks!

amanda: Haha! That would help!

Locoma: I'm glad you've enjoyed the latest clump of pages. :) This chapter is ending in a few pages (then it gets REALLY exciting ;) ).

LanceDanger: Indeed. ;)