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usedbooks

on Aug. 13, 2013

Look at those speech balloons, and how nicely they flow. Seriously, ignore the art, and check out my master ballooning skills. ;) This page is okay, imo. I had to rewrite the script a few times to get the essence of it all. Seiko had a bigger role in my first script and Yuki a smaller one, but Seiko decided to have a mini-breakdown, so there you go.

EDIT: I just noticed the mistake in my first panel, leaving out Yuki's gloves. :P (I'll fix it in the future print pages.)
 
skreem: Thanks!
 
plymayer, Anubis, and Peipei: I enjoyed your impressions/theories of the last page. :) Such varied and interesting takes. Seiko suffers orphaned-protagonist syndrome from time to time. Blaming the carpet, blood-sugar, etc. are good excuses she can use in the future.

Tantz: Thanks. :) I use a lot of trial and error with coloring. Tara isn't helping issues, either, but she doesn't mean to be so insensitive.