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on Jan. 14, 2016

I did my best with the dialogue. It was tricky to get the conversation across naturally. Alex came out again as more pissed off than sad/scared. I scripted him originally as more of a panicked guy, but when it got down to it, he just got really angry. I don’t know exactly how the writing evolves like that, but I guess it works. (Maybe I was working on more divergence between Mike and Alex. Mike has a professed anger problem but mostly gets sad because he’s afraid of losing control. By contrast, Alex doesn’t fear his anger.)

tupapayon: Indeed.

KimLuster: Thanks. I get along okay with proto-humans. But I like to give them back to their parents before the novelty wears off.

Anubis: Baby is sleeping! Be courteous, and use a silencer.

Peipei: Three individuals were shot (Mike, Puck, and Cass), so there were three shooters. (Cass and Derek should be in custody, so only Cass’s attacker is at large – in addition to Gibson and Val.)

plymayer: Four of my cousins have offspring. I have animals.

ghostrunner: When he levels up, he should take a quick-reload skill.