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on April 3, 2017

I like how this page turned out. There's not much to it, I guess, but the layout ended up working nicely with the pacing, and the characters' expressions are on-point. I hope the reading order makes sense. (Read all the way down on the left first.)

I cut quite a bit of dialogue from the original script and a few additional gestures and things – innuendo. But I think I managed to capture the spirit of it enough for Tristan's reaction to make sense.