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Last page of the chapter! The dialogue went through so many revisions for pacing and flow. :P It works. Captured the purpose and meaning and kept it in the proper tone for the characters.

There's one-ish chapter left in this arc. I haven't finished rescripting it, so it could end up as two.

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