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usedbooks

on Jan. 7, 2019

I am not happy with the art on this page. It's one I couldn't “solve.” I tried different angles, kept redrawing expressions. Nothing really worked, so I did what I could and moved on.

Aside from the art dissatisfaction, I am pretty happy with how the dialogue came out. It was rewritten many times and very carefully edited to fill the purpose without drawing the scene out too much. The last line was left out of the draft, and I debated including it. It changes the page drastically, imo.