Vile Withering

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7-29: Spartan Debate

Naughtelos

on June 3, 2009

The last panel on this took half an hour to butcher, crop and desaturate into the form it takes now, due, simply to the fact that Helena's hoof is the exact same color as the background- pitch black. Other than that, I'm trying to improve panel density, seeing that I have an 8.5" x 22" comic page, and usually only piss out 3 or 4 panels, I feel that constantly moving scenes, like this one, work better when the action is more rapidly illustrated using smaller panels. Oh, yeah, I'm also trying to cut down on wordiness, although the verbosity of Helena's speech really carries the humor, so that one doesn't count.