War Machine
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War Machine 7
Neilak20 onPage 7 of War Machine
This was an attempt at a flashback, but I dont think it worked out very well. The page was a bit violent, dark, hard to read, confusing, and the sound effects arn't very prominent.
I'm still working at utilizing sound effects better, as well as conveying stories better.
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