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Thoughts Unfold - Fair Trade 1/2

GreenKrog

on Jan. 12, 2014

Oh right, a webcomic! Actually, this was a good place to rant, because this is an excellent expository page to the rest of the chapter!
Also, you will notice (and notice you will, dammit) that I am using a lot more scenes where it isn't just two people talking to each other. It was pointed out to me by my ex that most of the previous chapter was two heads in a scene. A little.. dry. So I tried something new! I hope it works. Feedback would be appreciated.