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Chapter 5, page 3

Tantz_Aerine

on July 21, 2007

Hello everyone!

Behold page three, and more things revealed! And I think Darwin is going to be proven right, when once, sometime back in chapter two or three she had said that David has yet to become really mad. I think he is about to show us just how mad he can be right about now ;)

Artistic wise, I am a little 'eh' about this page. I like several elements of it- I was trying to go heavy on the expressions here. I am not sure they convey what I wanted to though. What do you think?

Also, on the Voting Incentive: I was told that the image didn't load properly, so I've uploaded it again for you to see if you like. I was slightly miffed to see that it didn't drop down to the whole joke sweater and the tree bark, for which I am so proud. Ah well. It is up there now! If you want, please vote and see it!!

Responds!

Locoma: It was intended to be humorous- David just didn't know what else to say ;) heh. And yes, he is doubly mad for having his sister involved in this affair in such a vile manner. The clothes were provided by the epitome of girliness, the Fiens daughters ;) heheh. David doesn't really buy Zou-zou 'girly' clothes. I don't think he has noticed that, though :D

Justnopoint: Thank you! I really did try to get the emotion across.

Phantasim fan: They are truly great indeed :) Thanks for commenting.

adobedragon: I know :( It was not entirely her fault, as Raven was on the 'good guy' list until she pulled a gun on Dave and Zoe.

Hyptosis: I think it's grounded like an airplane ;) But it is a little funny when thought of in that way. :)

Peipei: I know. I don't think she's really to blame either, but it was a pretty serious thing- mostly because she had no business meddling with Zoe's stuff.

I heart artists: Thanks! These few pages until the action hits again, I am trying for a lot of emotion.

I hate Reality: heh heh! Oh noes indeed! Though where she will be grounded remains to be seen XD

Darwin: Truly, he hasn't been eager to do so. Now he's really angry, too! XD heheeheh. And yes, Raven will need to get her comeuppance, ne? ;)

Ozoneocean: Drat! I knew I shouldn't have drawn those door numbers. XD And yes, Zou-zou really is sorry, because she loves Zoe and she just realised this is definitely not a game.

usedbooks: Unfortunately yes; they are very easy to mould in the hands of those with bad intention.

D0m: Well, she should have known better than giving out Zoe's things to anyone, but as far as trust goes, Raven was not a stranger, and up to now David and Zoe sort of trusted her to be on the proper side. So she is to blame a little, but she is not to be blamed for the deceit entirely. As for the whites of the eyes, like I said in pq, I fill them in or leave them unfilled depending on the emotions I want to get across and how I feel they are communicated with or without whites. As for the shading part, I have tried shading this comic, but it doesn't feel right like it does with other comics I have. I can't explain why, but it just doesn't feel as it should be when shaded all the way. :)

And that's that! Until next time!