Worenx Xtreme
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Filler: Bitch Bitch Bitch
Myollnir Catra onJust something I threw together to bitch at the MFZ for not offering me helpful advice. Now, I'm not the type to beg for some crits, but it's been a month and I want to know what to improve so I'll have a better chance at being accepted by Bob and George as a fancomic. Well, here it is. Worenx and Aya discussing what needs to be done.
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