Here's The official Page one (unless of course I decide to make another version in the hopefully VERY distant future. Okay granted somebody has already shown me something wrong with the last panel of this and I can understand fully what they're saying, However, I decided to keep it the same because I thought it helped out storywise. So if I offended you for not taking your idea I'm extremely sorry, but I really did appreciate the advise and would love if you could offer more for anything I may do in the future. But yeah this is page one. ^^
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