Zorphbert and Fred

56: Powers of the belly rub

on April 25, 2007

Not all that happy with this one. I like the idea of the aliens being freaked out about what a tummy rub can do to a canine's leg, but the punchline isn't 100% satisfactory, to me. I must be having a humorless day today *sigh* So, if any of you brilliant minds have a better suggestion for what they say in that last panel, feel free to post it! I may just change it and give the "winner' the credit for it! And by "credit" I may just mean a cameo/plug of some kind. oooooh yeah.

In other news, I already got 2 rejections letters back from syndicates. That means they REALLY had no interest in Z&F if they sent 'em back that quick. Boo hiss to them. No wonder I'm having a humorless day!

*grumble* dammit, I need ice cream.

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