Zorphbert and Fred

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91: City Excursion- an early departure

dgriff13

on Aug. 28, 2007

edit 8-30-07: updated this comic with carrollhach's suggested dialog. I think it's a definitely improvement. Also changed the angle in panel 3 per Dantheman's comment. Thanks guys!

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Still not 100% happy with the art, but.. eh.. getting there. Slowly. Colors are less assaulting, no?

hey! Guess what? The remixes are up in Comic Remix Land! Go see all the goodies- my remix and Neilak20's remix of a Z&F comic! Neilak20 of Soapbox Hill
http://www.drunkduck.com/Soapbox_Hill/index.php

Clench and Cheese comic I chose: http://www.drunkduck.com/Comic_Remix/index.php?p=261210

my remix:
http://www.drunkduck.com/Comic_Remix/index.php?p=265190



Z&F original comic chosen by Neilak20:
http://www.drunkduck.com/Comic_Remix/index.php?p=249654

Neilak20's remix:
http://www.drunkduck.com/Comic_Remix/index.php?p=265298

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Hey, guess what, guess what? I have this great idea. Y'know those numbers you choose from when leaving a comment? There's other numbers besides 5's. Seems like no matter what everyone gives a "5" everywhere, and I understand the habit and just "being nice" and all… but in my case, I'd love for you guys to really RATE my writing/humor for each comic. If you think it's some of the best from Z&F, leave a 5. If not, leave a 1-4. Explain why if you want… it'd help me get more of an idea what my fans LIKE and DON'T like when it comes to punchlines and storylines. After all, it's the writing that needs improvement!

Thanks all. I appreciate the extra support and help I've been getting lately, you guys ROCK.