Zorphbert and Fred

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94: City Excursion- Low-tech Fred

dgriff13

on Sept. 4, 2007

Another goodie, I think! Rate this guy honestly- is the writing great, decent, sub-par? Am I getting better?

More than a couple people have mentioned that I need to have the aliens STUDY humans more, to make the comic my basic view on how ridiculous and weird we are as a species (and we are). I like the concept of that, but for some reason I can't stop making fun of them trying to be dogs.. or pointing out how different they are as characters. The punchlines come so easy! So, for the next couple comics I'm going to try and veer from that habit. What do you all think?

It's tough to do a commentary on human beings and not be preachy, or take a political side, or a religious stance… that seems to be the natural tendency. Don't want to fall into that, either. So, we'll see what happens.

I think even "true" 3rd parties- like aliens- would make fun of a certain someone in the white house, no? LOL

Tomorrow is the final update for "Leftovers"! *sniff*