Zorphbert and Fred

118: The Stare-down

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118: The Stare-down

dgriff13
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TGIF. I mean, really.

I really wrote myself into a corner in this one. I had this idea for the punchline but ended up not liking it much. I spent probably an hour or so trying to re-write it, even using Zorphbert in the punchline. Things is the initial concept is good (we've all seen dogs do this!), and it has such potential. Frustrating!

And yeah, I didn't want Z to actually be begging (and enjoying the popcorn in the last panel), after all he is an alien and would probably think popcorn was a strange food to be eating. Styrofoam peanuts, anyone?

So, consider this a warm-up for the next PWITM contest (*ahem* SOON! *ahem). If you can out-wit me, go right ahead! Maybe, just maybe, I'll change it. Then you can have full bragging rights.


VOTE! See a sketch! Go now, shoo!

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