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Page 4: We gon' sip Bacardi...
TheMidge28 onThanks to all of you still reading and commenting.
I appreciate it so much.
I hope this isn't dragging for anyone.
this is going somewhere. :)
And I hope you enjoy where its going.
Hang tight more stuff coming and new update next Monday.
I am using the song In Da Club by 50 Cent for a reason and thought the songs lyrics were fitting for each page kind of like a theme for each.
So please let me know what you think and please don't be afraid of being critical.
I am not one for getting upset over criticism.
I prefer balanced honest crit.
An artist will not improve without it.
See ya next Monday and I have replied to previous comments.
Thanks again!
Replies to everyone on pacing:
Thank you so much for everyone's comments in regards to the pacing.
Everyone's input is appreciated greatly and I wish I could post more pages regularly instead of once a week. but I also don't want to burn through my buffer. Now with that said, onto individual replies…
Bocaj: Do you like these pages better than the old?
Nepath: Thank you, sir. :)
harryq: Shut your mouth! if you dare stop posting your comic I will hunt you down and give you an atomic wedgie… and a hug because I like you! if you stopped posting your work which has been and inspiration and encouragement to me it would be a true disappointment.
nyj: Thanks for the compliment and encouragement.
Mr.Hades: thanks for the tip. I will check that site out. :)
Doctor Shadow: Thanks so much for saying so! :)
Repoman: I am so glad the atmosphere is captured because with doing a horror comic as this atmosphere to me is like another character in the story.
Loud G: You have heard of tramp stamps, right? Given any night in a club and you will find dozens of these said items. You might also collect them as one would collect Pokemon cards. ;)
crocty: Bartenders are schmoozers. They schmooze and schmooze for that extra tip! That's what I was trying to communicate here.
Ryu: Ditto crocty's reply. there wasn't any intention that the smiling bartender was evil. but adds to the atmosphere of sorts.
ttyler: glad to know it read well for film because apart from comics film is my biggest influence.
DAJB: I concur. My intention is more lent towards a graphic novel with many chapters. So I glad the pacing works well in that format.
darkwaterfrey: I can see what you mean but last time I was in club it takes forever and a day to get drink whether you hold up finger or cleavage. But I definitely understand and appreciate your crit.
armandoB: Thanks! Ditto Repoman's reply.
der vossi: thanks for the support…
trevoramueller: and to you as well!
dgriff13: Thanks for the support. I think its the space between updates actually. Good to know people who do feel its slow may mean they want more or the next page now not later. :)
cs3ink: No truer words ever said. But I do appreciate what others think. Not to say I will change on account of it. But I want to be open to it for perspective purposes.
starwolf and jgib99: Thanks for the support as well! :)
therealtj: What are you jabbering about?! I have no idea what you are… holy crap it is him!
Rori: Thanks for the input. a catch-22 of sorts, I guess.
roycemarie: Enjoy the whiskey! I have no use for Bicardi either! :)
Thanks everone! I much appreciate your insight and perspective on pacing.
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