bloodhound
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Page 6: Cocktail.
TheMidge28 onI am really proud of this page.
It took forever but it was worth it.
New page next Monday and thanks again for all the comments and support. It is really appreciated.
Replies posted to your comments on the previous page.
some bits of explanation:
the cell phone is an IPhone. I borrowed a friends IPhone and drew from them how texts are done and how it looks on the screen. I originally was going to go with the green and grey but decided to keep the purple tone for artistic reasons for layout. The green would be distracting and put to much emphasis where it wasn't needed.
Also the screen name for the caller/text-er is from BrozB4Hoz if can't be read.
I also wanted to address one bit about the lack of dialogue and exposition.
With this story being a horror mystery, I decided exposition is not needed at this time in the story. The pictures are meant to tell the story also clues have been placed on every page. But can you put the story together and the clues. If I am a good story teller, and I sure hope I am, putting the pieces together should not be extremely hard. Like did you notice the Kanji on the guys jacket?
therealtj did. It does mean something.
Sorry tj.
see if you can look it up on-line.
I hope this becomes fun for everyone as they try to figure things out.
If you are not wanting to play Crack the Case I hope you enjoy the story and the ride. More to come.
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