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angelfish, page 170

kalliikak

on July 20, 2007

this page worked much better in my head. the layout got a little jumbled when i started putting the panels together in the end. and the text reads funny (as far as natural pauses and changes in inflection). but that's the bit on reading back over stuff i guess.

and again, all this stuff could use further clarification… i'm gonna have to figure a way to do that for any who care. maybe back to that appendix type idea, where i can explain stuff like a text book and not feel like my characters are detailing things in that wonderous b-movie dialogue.

thanks for reading