pokemon world

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  • BEEP BEEP IM A JEEP at

    yes, my latias is invisible and pinning him!! HA cause i said to!!

  • Kinuchio at

    Sorry for the double post a few pages ago, anyway good job but why is Brock in the Air? Is he pinned to the wall or something *snicker*

  • soniccomicwriter at

    ok got ya

  • Erk at

    i can tell your getting better, but you might want to try keeping the chars speech bubbles out of their faces.

  • soniccomicwriter at

    i forgot to make it white i ment to change it back to white sorry its not to do with me and thanks for wat you think

  • theduckofanime at

    Your backgrounds look nice, but the extra space at the bottom leaves something to be desired. You might have wanted to put the note on the side in your comment for the strip.

    Try not to fill your word bubbles with red, the thin black text will blend in with it a bit easier.

    Your characters kinda speak stiffly. You may want to repeate your dialouge to yourself to see if you like it. If it sounds like you'd say it, it's usually pretty good.

    Really it's not too bad a start, just needs work.

  • soniccomicwriter at

    pokemon is not its the best

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