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          OverDEW
sovietturkey on…just like this update.
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DEW,
moisture condensed from the atmosphere, especially at night.
OVERDUE,
too long awaited;  late.
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Better than yesterday's,  but I'm still not entirely happy with it.  Not sure if the "Shoot."  should be "…shoot."  or if there should be an exclamatory "*condense*" somewhere by the dew droplet.
Meh.  I think it works as is,  but,  it's still slightly missing something.
 
        
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