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OverDEW
sovietturkey on…just like this update.
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DEW,
moisture condensed from the atmosphere, especially at night.
OVERDUE,
too long awaited; late.
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Better than yesterday's, but I'm still not entirely happy with it. Not sure if the "Shoot." should be "…shoot." or if there should be an exclamatory "*condense*" somewhere by the dew droplet.
Meh. I think it works as is, but, it's still slightly missing something.
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