In the original draft this page didn't have the voice-over… but I figured it would ease the transition from the opening monologue to the story. And it fits.
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Midge: I think I mentioned somewhere that I'm not really writing these pages as web comics: having to go back and to reread some is a necessary evil which would be minimized when reading this in printed form. That's both because I tend to not establish necessary information in advance, but to give it piece by piece as the story progresses. But you're right on all accounts, which tells me I'm not such a bad storyteller after all :-) Fitz: It's a pleasure reading your comments. They make me wanna upload pages more frequently ^__^ Terroquita: Thanks, seems you're also a victim of the one-page-a-week schedule… I don't expect you to "get" everything right on the spot, but rather to go back and reread the whole chapter once it's been completed. Until then, please keep enjoying my artwork :-D DAJB: Keen observation! :D Thanks! Nepath: Thanks; that does seem like a better way to read these - my pages rarely ever manage to stand alone.
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