Sometimes I'm afraid readers might lose touch of this character, since pretty much all I'm doing is making him seem quite dislikable. So I think a little introspection here and there is direly needed.
Also, there's a little "Count of Monte Cristo" theme going on… Edmond Dantes was mentioned on an earlier page, and that's also one of the reasons why I'm having him talk (um, think) about revenge here.
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alejkhan: Milk and cookies! :D Exactly. Hmmm… you don't seem very loyal to your gender. Which may help you in liking this guy. You know, writing all of this is like an experiment to me… trying to find out if it all makes sense in some way. You know, sometimes you'll only find out whether or not something makes sense when you write it down, or when you say it out loud. I wouldn't say any of this out loud. But it's very good to know that it does make sense to you.
JNP: You're scaring me more with each comment. You mean to say you ran out on a girl who was all sexy-like? :O It doesn't mean you're dislikable… just plain irrational ;-) And you're the second commenter to root for this character this week… so, 2:0 for him.
DAJB: Sometimes it does look suspiciously like stupidity though ;-)
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