This is actually the first time I had the chance to write a "to be concluded" caption. How exciting! Turns out I miscalculated though: This chapter only has 20 pages, 2 pages short of my usual fare… but maybe you can just count the "signifikhan" omake thingie too? The thing is, this page came together so nicely, I didn't feel like adding additional pages. It may be a bit much to take in all at once, and to connect all the dots, but I know my readers are smart! :P
You may want to look at this chapter's title page once more too. I refined the look of the egyptian statue a bit for this page… the pyramid pencil sharpener can be found on the page before last too… so this is actually the same room. I may post the first version of the script at some point in the future, because it was more explicit and had more scenes in & around the modern-day "Cinnamon City" (which, as you might have guessed by now, isn't a city at all). It would have had the mean Doc complaining about the fact that Rob's gone, for instance, and then settling on another 'bot for compensation… or maybe two? I'm not sure :P Anyway, here she is, complaining about her inability to forget herself… yeah, I'd want my money back.
Oh, and: "I haven't even kissed a girl" - that's my kind of a cliffhanger.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
REPLIES:
JNP: I think it's an omen. I should NEVER explain plot points! :D
DAJB: People don't just kiss the next person in the doorway! As you stated on your Valentine's Day post, it might be considered sexual harrassment! ;-)
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