the Forest Green
Author notes
Prologue Page 3
Kilre onI know the page layout's a little confusing; that's my bad. I didn't realize that I was drawing the page right-to-left until I was doing the dialogue. I can't flip the page without ruining continuity, especially with Kalthan's arm as it is. Ah, well, I hope how the dialogue flows will help determine the flow of the page.
I'll try not to repeat that blunder.
On the good notes, character introductions! They are, in order of appearance, Kalthan, Sam, Ken, and Argae. I'm letting Argae the drakin tell the story from her perspective for now because it was better than what I originally wrote for that scene.
See ya over at Beautiful Skies on Sunday.
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