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Chapter Two: Friends and Foes

Darth Mongoose

on Feb. 23, 2010

…Well well, who have we here? Kekeke!

My aim for this chapter, other than trying to keep improving the art and narrative flow in general, is to try to use my page layouts more, and be more creative with them. One of the nice things about a chapter break is the excuse it gives you to tweak things. It's less inconsistent looking than changing things partway through an ongoing chapter. I'll be taking the opportunity to make a few tune-ups to make the art and pages more polished.

Oh, by the way, I updated my personal art site. There's now a 4 page sample of the comic I did that was a manga jiman winner:
http://www.kateholdenart.com