So, at first I thought I'd take it back and end the page on the last one. However, I didn't think it was right to end it on Keiko. Instead, I end it on a hand print in some rubble. Meh. I like the way this page feels though, and it is a good end that is also a "to be continued" - which it will!
But first, let's take a break! I want to work on Jump now, and make a nice buffer for Lola. Then, let's get to the next chapter, which is entitled: "Chapter 4: An Audience with the King."
Thanks so much everyone for reading and finishing this chapter with me!
Here's the Original Scripts, if you are interested in reading some of this chapter in its rawest form.
Don't forget the rest of the Forum also has other interesting information in it about the world of Fire Born: Learn about the Caste System. Read a Time Line of events. Check out part of the World Map. Fun for all!
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