These audiences with the King have hopefully given some insight into the evil team, though slight. I know it's really dialogue heavy, but I really like how the dialogue turned out here. It just turned out well for me! I also noticed on this page a personality quirk in Dentain's speech. He likes to give these single word comments about things that don't sit well with him. I hadn't realized it until now. Funny how that happens.
One last page to go, a nice transitiony page to the next chapter, which is (currently) titled "The Massacre of Ran-Reddak."
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