So, taking all your advice into account, I spent the day reworking this sequence and adding pages. So much for trying to write this chapter with a 30 page limit! I'm hoping, new and improved narration, images, and dialogue will help make things make sense…I guess. *sigh*
The next page, which should've updated today may follow soon!
Thanks for reading and voting.
12/05/09: So much for that promise! HAHA! Comic will be coming later in the day/evening. Apologies for lateness, but I was just finishing up my very last project of the semester! Yay! Vacation!
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