I did this one a little after the last page I updated here, so the action and panelling still isn't perfect. However, I did work my ass off on the thumbnail for the next page and I think it'll be much nicer.
It's hard to remember that this is my first comic, I push myself pretty hard to do things but sometimes I get so caught up in it, I make it worse.
I'm happy with the flow of action on this page. Now I just need to bring flow of action together with dynamic panelling and I think we'll be getting somewhere.
Also, I'm going back through the old pages and replacing my shitty handwriting with a nicer handwriting style font. I thought maybe my handwriting would make things look more gritty but really, it just makes everything look awful. Huzzah!
Thanks again for comments and criticisms, it all helps push me to be a better comic artist
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