Terror

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Prologue 2: How The Nightmare Begins... (P. 2)
xaxelx onYea, this was supposed to be published 5:00 PM (Eastern), but I had a few minor setbacks… So, here it is.
Here we just have some simple dialogue, and a few visuals, not too great to me, though… Your suggestions and opinions, even criticism, is what I want the most. With the opinions, I mean on this page, as well as the ones I am making soon.
SOME SORT OF CAMEOS THAT FIT KIRBY WOULD BE NICE, AS WELL! (No Knights…) Uhm, it's pretty much like making your own enemy/friend to Kirby and whomever. I also need HTML help!
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