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The Escape

Amelius

on Feb. 24, 2009

You guys got to benefit from some editing, I read this one the other night and decided not to post it because the dialogue was ATROCIOUS! Now, it's better, I think. It was so forced before. On occasions like this I can even recall exactly why. I was tired, and I had this dialogue all planned out you see, and by the time I finished a CTV page and then this, I was rolling out of my chair with exhaustion. Then I was like, "Ohh crap, what was I going to type here? I need transition because they're there then BAM they're outside I need transition…ZZZZZZZ OH!" *types halfheartedly*
It happens sometimes because I don't write my stupid dialogue down anywhere, I just wait until the comic is done after having the lines go through my head over and over when I'm working on the art. yup.