Author notes

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usedbooks

on May 28, 2008

It's such an awkward but necessary conversation. I must've rethought this conversation a dozen times. Originally, it was much longer. It would've taken a few pages, and I just couldn't bear dragging it out. They had a lot to discuss, but I only touched on the important points. (I had trouble expressing things, so ended up inserting a big "pause" panel that reflects, um, my writer's block.) – I rewrote the last line so many times, I just got sick of it and gave up. :-P

*IMPORTANT*
It has come to my attention that the "reveal" at the end of the last chapter was less revealing than intended. I finally figured out how to fix it and uploaded the corrected page. View it here. (I changed only the lines in panel 1.)

ghostrunner: I dunno… The ones at the top have others to take all the risks/blame.

Peipei: At least our favorite (ex-)sniper Kaida is having some luck with one angry vengeance seeker.

amanda: Curses! The reveal was too subtle! I finally figured out how to fix it, though.

JustNoPoint: That would be bad. The weird thing is that I established Yuki's fear of heights awhile ago. Either she or I seem to have forgotten. Whoops.

n_y_japlander: Brad doesn't get pulled into trouble very often, even when he runs into it head-on. (He's had a couple close calls with throwing knives, but no bloodshed yet.)