Zephyr of Fate

Prologue--Page5

on July 22, 2009

This was partly inspired by that horrible Dungeons and Dragons movie where the main character runs out of the cave shouting he found the magic scepter (or whatever it was) that everyone was looking for. The bad guys found him not long after.

Though nobody's going to say Julie was just as loud prior.

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a_star at 23 Jul, 2009, 06:56 PM

Thanks! ^^;;
I thought if Julie was going to slap someone, it shouldn't be some wimpy little smack but a big ol' royal KAPOW!
But also I'm sure she didn't want to knock him out. So maybe she's only using 50% of her power right now, haha. I'm sure Blk would know better than me.
Xade at 23 Jul, 2009, 05:08 PM

like the expressions and how you made his cheek a little red

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a_star at 23 Jul, 2009, 06:56 PM

Xade at 23 Jul, 2009, 05:08 PM