Thread "After." in forum "The stories."

Posted at 11:04PM, Apr. 18, 2011

This will work as a discussion thread for all the after stories.

Starry starry night.

Written by Gunwallace illustrated by Skreem.

As i had no hand in this I will spill my guts on it.
When Gunwallace sent me the scripts for after I thought they were nice but lacking, he sent me a lot of scripts so most were skimmed over. When I sent some to Skreem I'm not sure he (I assume Skreem is a he) immediately saw much in them either. However after mulling it over Skreem took it on and VERY quickly delivered the complete story. The art really helped me appreciate the story and I went back and looked over the after shorts again and properly. I'm sure some people won't get them but they are great little shorts and I have one in the works and very soon there is another one from Skreem as well.

Posted at 12:04AM, Apr. 24, 2011

Fire sale

This is actually part ten of the after series but according to Gunwallace it doesn't matter which order they go in. He should know he writes them.

The art is a bit different to anything else I've seen Skreem do and it really works for this.

Originally the script was a bit longer but was edited down to give it morepunch, this is the script of the final page.

Page SIX
6/1
Mike: "I'm sorry, Alex. I'll make it up to you. How about a nice BBQ dinner tomorrow?"

6/2
Mike (doing strong man arms): "Man make fire for woman!"
Alex: "Well, maybe …"

6/3
Mike: "With a bottle of expensive wine?"

6/4
Alex: "Two bottles and a backrub."
Mike: "Sold."

END