Brenton:oh i'm doing alright.i've been keeping myself busy…ha ha ha.(the last thing i need is to tell her that i was on the couch for a week.)
Chi Chi:oh? and how about your job?
Brenton:*he then smiled widely*still teaching P.E
Chi Chi:see Goten? this is why i'm making you study so you can have a decent profession like your brothers.
Brenton:hahaha….*the demi-sayian rubbed the back of his head*(so Goten is studying now? heh poor guy.)*he then watched as Goten and his children ran off to play*don't you think you are forcing to much on Goten? i mean his not exactly a….academic….genius.*as he said those 2 words Chi Chi's red ki flared as she got angry* *gulps* nevermind.
Shallot:(why is he scared of his mother? she's a weakling.)
Sakura:lunchtime!! get it while its hot!
Brenton:alright!*as Sakura walked out she had a big plate of burgers which after he sat down he began to eat.*
Chi Chi:anything else going on?
Brenton:well… there is a tournament coming up that Sakura Shallot and i will enter i guess.
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Brenton:*the demi-sayian rubbed the back of his head*aww come-on mom! that's why i asked for a day off in advance! trust me my class will be fine with a sub.
Shallot:if you ask me they probably were happy to get 1.*Brenton glared at Shallot*
Brenton:oh ha. ha. your a true comedian.
Sakura:(ugh here we go again…)no fighting in front of the kids.*the demi-sayian got up and began to stretch*
Brenton:those were great burgers Sakura i'm gonna spar in the forest.*he then walked out the door*
Sakura:have fun!*Goten and Bardock followed behind*
Bardock:wait for us dad!
Goten:yeah bro we want to go with you….Brenton?*the eldest of the demi-sayian was looking back at the corner of his eye*
Brenton:…fine. just do me a favour and don't look back.we're being watched.
Goten:what!?
Bardock:seriously?
Brenton:stay close.*they then head towards the forest*…move!*he then pushed Goten out of the way and got hit by a ki blast*
???:*a man in a brown cloak covering his green gi appeared*oops sorry about that i thought that was father..*the cloak fell off showing a white haired Sayian with spikes and horns on his face* *not to far away Fuu was watching*
Fuu:i can't completely trust Xicor but if he wants to kill Goku he has to kill the timepatroller first.
Goten:he does look a bit like dad…
Brenton:who the hell are you?
Brenton:(a big fan?…either he knows about me through hell or by the Timebreakers.)*he knocked a few ki blasts while Bardock hit the rest*
Bardock:are you alright Goten?
Goten:y-yeah.
Brenton:*the demi-sayian glared at him*well who or whatever you are you already made your first mistake.*Xicor smirked*
???:oh? do tell.
Brenton:1.you attacked me. and 2 you attacked my brother twice.*he then smirked*3 strikes and you are out pal.
*Xicors smirk turned very sadistic looking*
???:ha..hahahahaha!
Brenton:(well his insane.)*they then smirked at each other doing a stare down for a few seconds until-
???/Brenton:HAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!
*they started to power-up launching there ki towards the sky*
Goten:woah…
Brenton:Goten both you and Bardock should go home now…
Bardock:but da-
Brenton:this isn't up for debate!!*Bardock was startled by his father shouting*home now!!
Bardock:o-ok!*they then flew off but-*
???:you are all my pray!
Brenton:you woul-kids look out!*he then tried to save them but Bardock was hit* Bardock:guh!*Xicor kneed Brenton in the gut and slammed him in the back sending him towards the ground*
???:pfft! weak…and to think "they" had so much trouble with you.*the demi-sayian looked at his now twitching son as Goten tried to wake him up.this unsurprisingly caused Brenton to get angry*
Brenton:you…bastard.GWAHHHHHH!!!!!!*he started to power up out of anger showing his god ki as he turned into a supersayianblue*enjoy your last breath because now..I'M MAD!!!!!*he flew in and kicked Xicor in the gut and shot a powerful ki blast but Xicor vanished and as he reappeared he tried to hit him but he blocked by crossing his arms*
*Gohan flew in as he sensed the fight before hand and saw Bardock*
Gohan:Goten what happened!?
Goten:this freaky guy is attacking us.*Gohan looked up and he saw the anger in Brentons eyes*
Brenton:ugh!*he then spat out blood as Xicors foot was still on Brentons back*
Gohan:get off him now!*Gohan flew towards him making Xicor jump away from them*
Gohan:you ok Brenton?*the demi sayian while still enraged gave a death glare towards Xicor*try to calm down a bit.
Brenton:the bastard almost killed my son Gohan! you can't tell me you wouldn't feel the same way if he attacked Pan.
Gohan:…lets fight him together we'll have a higher chance of beating him this way.
???:heh you to Gohan? well today is my lucky day.
Gohan:*Gohan lifted Brenton up*who are you? what do you want from us!?
???:hmph all you need to know is that i want is to kill Goku.
Brenton:but why? your a clone like me right? there is no need for all of this!
???:that is where you are wrong.*Xicor flew in and kicked Brenton in the gut.he then tried to punch Gohan but he grabbed Xicors arm and tossed him over his back*
Brenton/Gohan:MASENKO HA!!!!!*the beams hit both sides of Xicor making a brief explosion. and as the dust cleared he vanished*
???:i figured if i kill you weaklings then "Father" won't hold back after losing his children.*he then appeared behind Gohan about to strike but-
Brenton:KAIOKEN!!!*Brenton now using SSBKaiokenx10 punched Xicor sending across the forest*you want a real fight then lets go freak…hey Gohan.
Gohan:uh yeah?
Brenton:can you still use the power the elder kai unlocked?
*they then tried to attack Xicor at once but he easily blocked their attacks*
???:this is what your planet has to offer?
Brenton:oh shutup already!*he then fired multiple ki blasts which then surround him*
???:do you honestly think this old trick will hurt me?
Gohan:KA….ME….HA….ME….HA!!!!!!!!!!*using the distraction Gohan fired the strongest kamehamehawave he could muster pushing him into the hellzone grenade field making multiple explosions*did we….do it?
Brenton:……no.*suddenly a brief explosion of ki transcend towards the sky making a very hairy and powerful Xicor appear*supersayian4?
???:no say goodbye to your loved 1s because this is there last days on this planet!!*out of a rage he fired a ki blast at Goten but-
Bardock:Goten!*Bardock took the blast afterwards he….didn't move.*
Goten:Bardock!! wake-up!*Brenton not showing emotion slowly walked up to them now in his normal state*Brenton i'm sorry he-*Goten was surprised as Brenton put his hand on his brothers head. he then picked up his son and-*
Brenton:NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!*he then made a small crater with a punch to the ground*
Gohan:oh no! Goten get back now!!
???:heh now you see its…useless?*suddenly the whole planet was begining to shake violently*
Brenton:GRAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*he then turned into a supersayian2 but he kept going*RAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!!!!!!!!!*suddenly lighting struck down around him until the pupils in his eyes vanish and his ssj2 body is surrounded with god ki*I AM….*as he walked he left a boot size crater on the ground surprising Goten*I AM….
*Sakura flew up towards the sky to see what was going on and saw Bardocks lifeless body and then the completely enraged Brenton*
Sakura:*gasps* oh no!
Brenton:I AM GONNA ENJOY KILLING YOU!!!!!
???: My work here is done. (With the power you are generating now it'll tear this planet apart!)*grins* HAHAHAHA! Catch me if you can! if you'll survive that is! All units leave the pin has been pulled!*flies off*
Sakura: Wait, what did he just say now?! *looks up at the energy emitting off brenton* wow, that is huge.*powers up* Honey calm down! You're going to cause an eruption!
Brenton:*the demi-sayians god ki vanished but not his temper* GOD DAMNIT!!!!*he then punched the ground a tear went down his scar sided eye he then looked angry* after we wish Bardock back i don't care what anybody says i'm getting revenge.*he then flew off*
Sakura:Brenton! wait!!*he kept going until he wasn't in eye view.*
Shallot:the idiot has the right idea.
Sakura:*Sakura was startled*Shallot?! how long have you been here?
Shallot:what do you expect? i sensed the fight and watched from afar.now! what i understand is that they have been attacking him and you for awhile right? so…*she then smirked*id say it is about time we fight back.
*she then punched the air*
Sakura:you actually care?
Shallot:of course! no 1 messes with my punching bag but me.
*meanwhile not too far from WestCity Alex was flying his hoverbike and saw a angry Brenton with a Dragonball Radar in hand*
Alex:hey Brenton! whats…wrong?*before he finished his sentence the demi-sayian flew past him*(woah! he looks ticked…)
Brenton:(ok the first Dragonball is…here.)*he then landed in-between what looked like a bandit camp*
???:freeze!*CLICK! CLICK!. he was now surrounded by soldiers with AK,s*
Brenton:(the Radar said the Dragonball is right under my nose..)don't be morons. don't fire and you'll live.
*as they unloaded the gun until each 1 was empty each Bandit looked at their gun and then Brenton while sweatdropping*
Brenton:*sighs* look today hasn't been a fun day for me.all i am asking is for the damn Dragonball!!*the bandit flinched but then ran to 1 of the tents and brought out the 1 star ball giving it to the demi-sayian*good 1 down…6 to go.*he then vanish via instant transmission scaring the bandit. meanwhile in otherworld*
Bardock:so this King Kai guy is at the end of Snakeway? man Dads instant transmission would be helpful right about now.*he then flew off*
*back on Earth Brenton had already collected 4 Dragonballs*(the 4 star ball is here?)*he was now in what looked like a abandon military base*this place looks familiar but why.*he then accidentally knocked down a wall that had the Red Ribbon logo on it* this is the Red Ribbons base? well atleast its abandoned now where is that Dragonball?
???:you shouldn't be here.*as he turned around he saw a beautiful woman with long hair. a red and blue dress and RR logo labcoat. but what caught his attention was her blue eyes and the fact he couldn't sense her energy*
Brenton:i'm just searching for a Dragonball i'll be gone when i find it.
???:hmm…*she then looked around him*you'll be perfect!
Brenton:with what?
???:i need help with a experiment.can you please help me?
Brenton:uh sure i guess?*she then dragged him into what looked like a lab.it had blueprints taped to the wall and alot of machinary that Brenton couldn't understand.not to mention left over takeaway food boxes on her desk*(i guess she doesn't get out much…)oh by the way my name is Brenton.
???:*blinks* (wait, did he say brenton? probably just a coincidence. Still, can't give him my Identity though.) Nice to meet you Brenton. Folks call me Alice. Now, I need you to stand here its very important…no here. here? Ah, this is perplexing. Just hold this for now while I get something. *Puts a device in his hand and runs back*
*Brenton looked at the device with a raised eyebrow*
Brenton:(maybe she's just a ex scientist like…Dr.Gero.)*that name still seems to make him angry for obvious reasons*(but then again her lack of ki is troubling even though she does seem nice)you right in there Alice?!
???:y-yes just a moment!*she then came back with another device as she started to set everything up*if you don't mind me asking you said you were looking for a Dragonball right? why is that?
*the demi-sayian clenched his free hand*
Brenton:….my son was killed by a monster so i'm gonna wish him back with the help of Shenron.
???:oh. i'm sorry…
Brenton:*the demi-sayian hid his temper with the best smile he could muster*its ok.anyway what are we doing with all this?*he then pointed at the device in his hand showing a confused yet intrigued look*
*meanwhile in otherworld not knowing where King Kais place is located Bardock was stumped.untill he saw a building on the side of Snakeway*
Bardock:this must be King Kais place.*he then floated down and knocked on the door.KNOCK! KNOCK!*hello? is this King Kais place?*who opened the door was a pretty blue skin woman with blonde hair wearing a Chinese dress*oh sorry but could you give me directions to King K-
???:*gasps* Princess Snake we have a guest!
Bardock:Princess who now?*she dragged him inside and closed the door*
???: What we are doing is building a device that can do many thing like for example analyze something. *begins to connect things to what Brenton is holding*
*back at snakeway…*
Princess Snake: a place where we can take care of all your needs. Welcome to the palace!
Bardock: Well, that's great and all but I have to get going…
Princess snake: oh? are you sure you can't stay for some food?
Bardock:…Well I am a lil hungry. I suppose some food can't hurt.
Brenton:(kinda sounds like tech Alex has made over the years…makes me wonder.)that's cool i guess.i was honestly expecting that to be some robot activating remote or something but that's pretty cool to i guess.
???:sorry to disappoint.
Brenton:*they then started to fix up said machine until*so how does this thing even work-
Machine:SCANNING!
Brenton:gah!*boom! the demi-sayian being startled by the booming robot voice fell to the ground.the machine itself then scanned Brentons face*…ow.
???:*"Alice" ran up to Brenton and picked him up*i'm so sorry.*Brenton just smiled as he rubbed the back of his head*
Brenton:its cool the voice just startled me a-
???:SCAN COMPLETE!
Brenton:guh!*if it weren't for the scientist holding his arm he would of fallen again.*
???:RR secret project detected hello Bioclone000 codename:Goku2 was said to be a failed experiment due to almost blowing up the lab on activation and escaping.*suddenly a long piece of paper escaped the machine so the scientist read it*
???: that means your not him but his clone….
Brenton:*the demi-sayian smiled as he decided to make a joke*so..is this going on my permanent record?
???:oh ha. ha.*she then playfully poked his arm*
Brenton:heh but yeah i'm a clone.not that it really matters.*he then smiled widely as he put both arms behind his head*
*back at Snakeway Bardock was sitting down and stuffing his face as Princess Snake watched*
Bardock:(as nice as her hospitality is something creepily familiar about her name…didn't Grandpa mention something about a…oh no.)uh thank you for the food but i really should be going to King Kais.*he then flew out of the house but as he did-a giant snake was chasing him*i knew it!
Princess Snake:clever boy it took the last guy hours before he escaped us but unlike him you'll be on the menu!
???: (it does. this is big.) Well it doesn't have to. You are who you are after all. Anyway aside from helping me so suddenly, what brings you here exactly?
*back on snake way*
Bardock: *flying away* get away you crazy snake!
Princess Snake: I won't rest till I get my meal! I've been starving for ages!!!
Bardock:then chew on this!!! KAMEHAMEHA!!!!*as he fired said beam at the giant snake it knocked the creature out and sent Bardock on a heavy little planet*ugh my everything…
King Kai:you alright kid?
*back on Earth*
Brenton:oh right.*he then looked around her lab until-*found it!*and grabbed a Dragonball*now i need 3 more and i'll be able to wish back my son.*he then smiled widely at the scientist*
???:well then i wish you good luck.and if you need anything you know where i'll be.*the demi-sayian smirked as he put 2 fingers on his head*
Brenton:later.*he then vanished surprising the Android*ok now whats next a Dinosaur?*as he flew to the next Dragonball he went wide-eyed*(…what the hell?)*he felt powerful ki spike up near the Dragonballs location*oh what now? first that jerk with horns now this? whats next? am i gonna babysit Beerus!?…sigh whatever.*he then flew to the Dragonballs location and went wide-eyed*Whis?
Whis:ah there you are.*the demi sayian sighed in relief*
Brenton:what are you doing here?…Bulmas house is that way.*he then point at West Citys direction*
Whis:oh no i'm here for you. you see i was just checking on your training and…*Whis looked at Brentons damaged clothes*you seem to be doing well.
Brenton:*the demi-sayian picked up the Dragonball and frowned*sure why not…look Whis im kind of busy right now so-
Whis:here*suddenly a gi that looks identical to Gokus new gi but coloured swapped meaning its a blue gi top and pants with orange belt shoes and big wristbands*
Brenton:*he then put on the new clothes*uh thanks i guess.so why are you really here Whis.
Whis:…Goku thought it would be a fun idea to test his strength on you so…*he then tapped his wand on the ground teleporting the rest of the Dragonballs to them making the demi-sayian go wide-eyed*
Brenton:huh…
Brenton:right.*he then closed his eyes as he smiled feeling relieved.he then looked serious*Shenron! please! i need your power to correct a mistake!
Whis:hmm.*the Dragonballs started to flash as Shenron appeared*
Shenron:MAKE YOUR WISH!
Brenton:Shenron i-i want my son back! please i wish for Bardock to be resurrected.*Shenrons eyes glowed as Bardock appeared*
Shenron:YOUR FIRST WISH WAS GRANTED NOW MAKE YOUR LAST WISH!
Brenton:oh right 2 wishes…uh no thanks!
Shenron:…THEN FAIR WELL!*he then vanished as the Dragonballs scattered across the planet.Brenton then smiled as he hugged his son*
Bardock:heh hey dad.
Brenton:did you meet King Kai?
Bardock:yeah he…wasn't what i expected.
Brenton:*the demi-sayian smiled widely*
Yang:b-Bardock!
Bardock:Yan-oof!*she then tackle hugged him*
Brenton:kids listen i got to go and visit Grandpa*he then held onto Whis's back*i'll be back in….5 to 6 hours give or take.make sure you head on home oh and Bardock?
Bardock:yeah?
Brenton:im so proud of you.*he then smiled widely before he vanished thanks to Whis*
Bardock:(his proud of me…)
Yang:come on lets go home!*many minutes later the demi-Sayian and angel appeared on Beerus's Planet*
Brenton:well the Planet is still intact that's a good start-*he then looked up and noticed Goku and Vegeta boxing each other while wearing fingerless gloves*hey!
Goku:huh? its about time! take 5 Vegeta.
Vegeta:hmph.*Goku floated down while tightening his blue belt*
Goku:whats up?
Brenton:you sent Whis to get me…
Goku:oh right i forgot hehe…
Brenton:*the demi-sayian smiled widely*alright lets see what you got old man*he then unleashed his full potential the ownly difference besides his spikey hair and bangs was the noticeable electricity around his body*
Goku:woah! you had your power unlocked by the old man huh?
Brenton:yep since then i've reached greater hights.what about you father?
Goku:heh*to Brentons surprise Goku transformed into supersayianblue*
Goku:id say i've become a great deal stronger….alright lets go!*they then clashed at 1 another as Vegeta crossed his arms and watched*
Vegeta:(as far as half breeds go our eldest sons are the least prone to slack off…lets see just how effective his training on Earth.)
*the demi-sayian swatted them away looking angry*
Brenton:stop that!
Goku:stop what?
Brenton:stop holding back when you fight me! remember when i was a kid? you didn't even used supersayian3 against me! you hid that transformation for years!! i know when you are holding back.give me everything you got or i'll end this right now.
Vegeta:*the prince smirked*(spoken like a true Sayian)
*Goku looked serious*
Goku:alright it's ownly fair since you are giving it your all…HAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!*Goku powerd up flaring his god ki and zoomed in fast as he punched Brentons jaw.but he then smirked as he spin kick him.but not to far away*
Beerus:*yawns*what is with all the damn noise!!
Brenton:l-Lord Beerus!*he then fired a bunch of explosive ki blasts*
Goku:gah! everyone hit the deck!*Goku and Vegeta hid behind a giant boulder*man Beerus sure is ticked.
Beers:can't i have a week of rest without having a wake-up call!?*he then fired multiple ki blasts but Brenton used instant transmission to block the ki blasts and as the smoke cleared Brenton had faint but destructive purple glow around his body*
Brenton:will you grow up already!! your a god of destruction! quit acting like a 4 year old that missed his nap!*Beerus appeared in front of Brenton the demi-sayian had the same purple glow and now his pupils went from black to pink. both Vegeta and Goku noted this while Whis smiled.*
Beerus:you dare mock a God of Destruction!!?
Brenton:what God of Destruction?! all i see is a tired old hairless cat!
Beerus:Grr! how dare you!?*they then grabbed each others hand as there ki expanded trying to push each other back*
Goku:whats up with Brenton his ki is now similar to Beerus.
Whis:yes im afraid that was my doing.you boys recall i trained him first right? well Brenton can summon a bit of ki resembling a God of Destruction so i figured-.
Vegeta:you thought he would make a quick replacement if something happened to Beerus?
Whis:i could never get by you Vegeta.that is exactly it yes.
Goku:should we step in?
Whis:be my guest…
Brenton:*they then jumped away from each other*KAMEHAMEHA!!!!
Beerus:HAAAH!!!*they fired a ki move causing a brief explosion and as the smoke cleared they glared each other*
Beerus: I grow bored… *holds his hand out and makes a large red energy ball* its time I end this.
Goku: hey now, if you keep going you'll miss the food that's coming.
Beerus:*ear twitch* food you say? well im not doing anything important.*puts the ball away* Whis what should we have?
Whis: perhaps pizza?
Beerus: no, I've had my fill, what about a sundae?
Whis: what kind though?
Beerus: there's more than one type of sundae?! why don't we find out…
Goku:*moves to brenton* you ok son?
Brenton:*the demi-sayian rubbed his hair as he reverted back to normal*yeah i guess.
Goku:are you sure? well if you say so.hey! while we spar do you think you could use that strong god ki again?
Brenton:i don't know…maybe? its not exactly something i can turn on and off at will.
Goku:well then i'll just have to make you.
Brenton:wait what?
Goku:HAAAAAAAAAH!!!!*Goku began to power up. he then flew in and tried to hit Brenton but he dodged each hit.a few hours later.the demi-sayian body was bruised all over and his gi was torn off.the demi-sayian was breathing heavily*man what a bummer i guess we can try again tomorrow and-
Vegeta:Kakarot! look!
Goku:as he turned around Brentons ki turned purple*
Brenton:n-not yet! we're not done yet!!*he then opened his eyes which turned pink but thats not all.his body seemed to have less muscle and his hair spiked up*
Goku:whoa….now we're talking!
Brenton:GRAAAAH!!!!*he then flew in and kicked Goku as he blocked*
Goku:wow that is amazing.
Brenton:uh thanks.
Goku:now lets see what you can d-*suddenly a blue ki blast almost hit Goku*what the heck Vegeta!?
Vegeta:its my turn.
Brenton:(Vegeta is much stronger then dad…)*this made him smile*give it everything you got Vegeta!
Vegeta:*the prince smirked* with pleasure…*he then flew in and kicked Brenton but he blocked it with 1 arm*nice try your highness.
Vegeta:hmph. don't think because you easily are as strong as the gods that i won't surpass you both!
Brenton:hehe! we'll see Vegeta.*meanwhile in the sky the god and angel were eating their sundaes*
Beerus:hmm maybe this is a blessing in disguise.
Whis:indeed. both Goku and Vegeta do seem even more motivated to surpass you.
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