Brenton:w-well you see Videl…Gohan is teaching you about energy right?
Videl:yeah…
Brenton:well all i did was follow Gohans energy i then vanish and boom! reappear here.
Videl:oh…can i learn it?
Brenton:im afraid not 1 wrong move and you might appear in space or another planet.*he then smiled at the fact that she has short hair*anyway i'll let you 2 lovebirds get back to your training. see ya later.*he then started to walk away*
Videl:love birds?…what is your brother talking about Gohan?
*Gohan the whole time had a red face steaming from anger and embarrassment*
Gohan:he uh well…likes to mess with me.
Brenton:Gohan and Videl sitting in a tree!!
Gohan:QUIET!!!
*Brenton chuckled as he head towards the Son home and sees Goku and Sakura training*
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Brenton:did you guys know Krillen isn't naturally bald?
Goku:heh yeah why?*Sakura tries to hit Goku but he dodges*Brenton:oh uh no reason.
Sakura:and how about Lazuli?
Brenton:..i think she's still mad at me.*they then went supersayain*
Goku:the android? why would she be mad at you?
Brenton:"cyborg"dad…and probably because i accidentally bailed on her a week ago.*they then started clashing Sakura tries to punch Goku but he blocked then vise verser.and unknown to the 3 conversing Bardock was tossing and turning until*
Bardock:dad!*pant!*(that dream felt so real…i almost went supersayain..)*he then got up*
Sakura:im sure you can think of something to make it up to her.Brenton:yeah? well as long as it doesn't involve my wallet…or something rediculous.
Bardock:dad?*Brenton turned around and smiled*
Brenton:are you alright Bardock?
Bardock:i…i almost did it.in my dream i was angry and i transformed.Brenton:hey don't worry about that right now just relax a-
Bardock:no! i want to become a supersayain!!…and i can't do that if you keep treating me like a child!
Brenton:…hmm i see.*Brenton looked at Sakura and Goku who both nod knowing what Brenton had in mind*you're right i haven't been fair.*he then smiled at Bardock as he put 1 arm on his shoulder*but now thats gonna change*we'll be back tomorrow
Sakura:ok honey
Bardock:uh dad we're are we going?
Brenton:you'll see.*he then used instanttransmission and they appeared at the lookout*
Piccolo:…do you think his ready?
Brenton:of course he is.Bardock you're gonna spend a whole year inside that chamber.
Bardock:you're not coming with me?
Brenton:i cant im ownly allowed 2 years in there and both your mother and i used them up.but i promise you won't be alone and that i will still be watching over you.
Bardock:then whose training with me?
Brenton:i uh..haven't thought that far ahead…*hearing this causes Bardock Piccolo Dende and Mr.Popo to anime style fall*
Bardock:dad! this is serious!
Piccolo:hmph don't you worry about me…but if you must know the hyperbolic timechamber gets more intense the further you are from the chamber i'll be fine…but you'll figure that part out for yourself.as for my limitations in the timechamber ive ownly used 1 year and can still survive 3 months more after due to the fact i survive ownly on water.
Bardock:huh…
Brenton:thank you so much Piccolo i owe you one.
Piccolo:a few actually.*the slugman smirks*but think nothing of it.now come on kid!
Bardock:er-yes sir!*they then entered the timechamber*
Brenton:hmm…mr.Popo do you by chance have a crystal ball lying around somewhere?
Mr.Popo:no im afraid not…*Brenton then smiled widely*
Brenton:its alright.i just happened to know a few "old hags" 1 which is watching us right now.*suddenly time stopped and a angry Supreme Kai of time could be seen*
Supreme Kai o/T:WHO ARE YOU CALLING A OLD HAG!!!?*Brenton was grinning*
Brenton:er…not you Supreme Kai of Time…but since you're here…
Supreme Kai o/T:what? but i thought…we'll talk about this later.*she then walked away and came back with a crystal ball*you can use this to watch your son train.and here.*she handed him a new scroll*new and undamaged.
Brenton:thank you ma'am.*she then disappear allowing time to resume*like so! see?
Dende:wuh?…
Brenton:heh.*Brenton then placed the crystalball down sat down and watched carefully as Bardock looked around*
*in the time chamber*
Piccolo:Bardock this will be your home for the year…becareful as you go down those steps the gravity will throw you off.*Bardock looked around amazed at what he was seeing*
Bardock:Mr.Piccolo sir. this place….i know this place!
Bardock:mom and dad told me how i was born here which was surprising especially for dad for some reason.*hearing this made Piccolo laugh*
Piccolo:i can imagine that.now come on.*they then walked down the steps and begun training.* *outside the timechamber*
Brenton:look at him go! his so determined to get stronger im proud of him.*Brenton then sensed 2 unfamiliar strong energies so he got up*can you guys keep me posted incase something happens?
Mr.Popo:of course but where are you going?.*Brenton then smiles before Putting 2 fingers on his head.*Brenton:im checking something out.*he then teleported into a little forest*
Dende:Mr.Popothere are 2 strong energies where Brenton is…and they don't feel friendly.*at the forest*
Brenton:come on out! i don't know why you're here but leave now.???:no can do timepatroller…*as the 2 figures were finally shown it was apparent that they were female wearing similar armour to Mira and well they were female majin buus. 1 green with hair covering 1 eye the other was blue with long hair and blue eyes*you see we were created to kill you by Towa herself isn't that right Guu?
Guu:thats right Bluu.*Brenton didn't look impressed*
Brenton:(ugh…why do i always have to fight the crazy ones?)*his scroll then started to glow*what did you do!?
Bluu:oh nothing important.*she took out what looked like a cookie version of a man and ate him*just had a little snack.
*Brenton did a small smile as they walked up to him*
Brenton:i should warn you this food bites back…*he then powered up but Guu and Bluu fired a strange pink beam at Brenton luckily he dodged them.*
Guu:his alot faster then we anticipated no wonder his been causing Towa trouble.
Brenton:*Brenton rubbed the back of his head while laughing awkwardly*to be fair i haven't seen her in 7 years…
Bluu:*hearing this made both Bluu and Guu smile.*thats right "you" haven't not yet anyway.
Guu:we were promised a decent fight please don't disappoint us before we eat you.
Brenton:*Brenton sighed*i won't…ready when you both are.(all i got to do is defeat them…easyer said then done Brent…they have strong ki.)*he then went into a defensive position* im not gonna hold back!*he then transformed into a supersayain and smiled*
Bluu:why are you so happy? we're here to kill you.
Brenton:honestly im just so excited. i haven't had a chance to fight a strong opponent in years and i can tell you 2 will give me trouble.*Guu smiled as she moved her hair away from her eye.*
Guu:flattering your opponents can ownly get you so far.*Guu then flew at Brenton and tried to punch him but he blocked by crossing his arms*
Brenton:its a shame…i can sense both of your ki,s you 2 would make perfect sparring partners*Bluu fires a concentrated ki beam but Brenton reflected it towards the sky until it disappeared*
Guu:i'll admit im starting to have fun myself.*Guu then tries a full frontal assult of punches and kicks but Brenton kept dodging*
*Brenton looked to his left and noticed Guu was charging at him at the same time so what he did next surprised the majins.after getting punched in the face which made his mouth draw blood. he put his arm on Guus shoulder and i,td away from the explosive ki blasts which vaporized most of the forest in the process*
Bluu:(wh-what the!?did he just save her?)*they then reappeared*
Brenton:*Brenton looked at Guu*are you alright?
*Guu was surprised but then smiled as she flipped her hair back a second time*
Guu:don't you worry about me.*Brenton then looked at Bluu*
Brenton:you had it all wrong i didn't mean to offend you…"blue" was it? i just get excited when i meet strong people like you 2.and from the look of that destructive power…*Brenton smirked*it looks like im gonna have trouble.but uh id like to make a request.*this gets both Majins attention*
Bluu:what is it?
Brenton:if its alright id prefer we'd fight with a little more room and little less life too kill.
Guu:hmph sure whatever.
Brenton:great follow me.*they then flew until they reached a rocky mountain*this will be perfect.well ladys im ready for round 2.
Guu:don't think because you saved me that i'll go easy on you.
*Brenton quickly zoomed in and tried to kick Guu but she blocked*
Brenton:i hope not. both of you give it your all!
Bluu:gladly*both Bluu and Guu try to double team Brenton by blasting him but he dodges*quit dodging already!*this causes the demi Sayain to smile in a cheeky manner*
Brenton:now why would i want to do that? ki blasts hurt.
*Brenton was trying hard not get hit by Guu but to his surprise he was hit by Bluu,s ki blast sending him to the ground.and as he got up he wiped the blood from his mouth*
Brenton:ok time to get a little more serious.AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!*the demi-sayain went into a supersayain3 and smirked as he landed a hit on Guu and sent her flying. he then cupped his hands together and chant the familiar technique before firing it at Bluu*you 2 have no hope in defeating me now.
*meanwhile at the Briefs residence Faker was training Trunks and Taurren until..*
Faker:(pfft idiot!)we'll finish up here.
Taurren:why?
Faker:im going out.don't follow me.that goes for you too Trunks.Trunk:uh alright…** *back to the fight. the 2 majins smirked as they powered up being surrounded by ki similar to Miras.this causes Brenton to go wide-eyed*
Brenton:…im screwed aren't i?
Bluu:very.*the 2 majins then flew at Brenton and both kicked him in the gut they then followed with a ki blast which hit the demi-sayain dead-on. this causes the demi-sayain to cringe in pain.*
Brenton:hahaha…this will be more fun then i realised.*he then got up smiling*
Guu:you are either really determined or really stupid.
Brenton:a bit of both actually.*he then start to pant as he already feels the strain from his 3rd form before reverting back to normal still smiling*
Bluu:hmph this will be quick.*they then both gathered ki in 1 hand fired but Brenton ownly just managed to dodge them*
Brenton:im not*pant*giving up just*pant*yet.*meanwhile with Faker he was flying at top speed but then turned his head as he sensed Sakuras energy and went wide-eyed as he sees the anger in her eyes and Brentons sword and sheathe on her back*
*back to the fight.Guu walked up to Brenton and with one quick motion punched him in the gut causeing him to cough out blood*
Guu:as interesting as this was im getting hungry…d-
Sakura:KEEP YOUR DIRTY FINGERS OFF OF HIM!!
Bluu:hmm?*suddenly a familiar purple beam hit Bluu while Sakura zoomed in and slashed Guu in half with Brentons sword*
*Brenton smiled as he used said sword to balance*
Brenton:heh…dunno but it sure came in handy. you guys took them out quickly.
Sakura:are you gonna be alright?
Brenton:yeah…i was just…caught off guard.
Sakura:good.BECAUSE IM GONNA KILL YOU FOR ALMOST GIVING ME A HEART ATTACK!!
*Brenton smiled widely while doing a small laugh earning him a glare from Sakura*
Faker:so…was that another work related accident or what?*Brenton then explained what he knew*…idiot they obviously said that to get you cocky! for all we know they could be after all of you guys.you Sakura and even Trunks!
Brenton:ok…ok i get it i screwed up…big time.*he then tried to stand*im just glad thats over.now if you don't mind…im gonna-*without saying another word Brenton callapsed onto the ground and started to sleep this causes Faker to sigh as he picked him up*
Sakura:lets take him to Dende,s we don't have any leftover senzu beans and he wouldn't want Chi Chi to worry.
Faker:right.
*a few hours later everyone but Dende was watching Piccolo and Bardock train via crystal ball until-*
Dende:his awake!
Brenton:so how is his progress?
Mr.Popo:see for yourself.*Brenton smiled as he could clearly see Bardock was finally a supersayain and was still training hard*
*Brentons now wide eyes shrunk as he smiled in both excitement and anticipation*
Brenton:r-REALLY!!? thats great!!*the sudden outburst causes everyone but Faker to smile*
Faker:huh id thought news like that would shock you.
Brenton:the thought of him surpassing me is so exciting!*Faker then smirked*
Faker:what about your "little princess" huh?
Brenton:Violet? shes uh…a work in progress.
Sakura:he means that his overprotective.*a vain could be seen on Brentons head as his eyes twitch*
Brenton:not the point…
Brenton:besides i feel i might of put to much pressure on Bardock. i won't do the same too Violet.that and i want them both having a nice childhood outside of training.
Sakura:aww look.*Brenton and Faker looked at the crystalball as Piccolo gives Bardock a cupcake with a lit candle* *in the timechamber*
Piccolo:happy birthday Bardock.
Bardock:thank you Mr.Piccolo!…but what about training…
Piccolo:today we won't be training and instead just relax for the day.you earned it.*Bardock happily blew out the candle and ate the cupcake* by the way i got a special present from your father.
Bardock:from dad?*Piccolo came back with a present and as for Bardock he was surprised to see it was the power pole*
Piccolo:he left it at the lookout and ownly told me to give it to you when you're ready.
Bardock:*Bardock then looked at another unopened present with a card that read "To Bardock happy birthday love mom and dad. p.s we're so proud of you."he then opened this present and went wide-eyed as he saw a blue headband and 2 blue wristbands a pair of new shoes and orange gi*this is so awesome! the young warrior then ran inside his little bedroom and started to put the gi on* *back outside*
Faker:you gave him the stick and orange gi?
Brenton:i figured they would be the perfect gift for him.although the gi was Sakuras idea.
Sakura:i think its adorable how he wants to be just like his father.
Brenton:the gi is still a bit much though…i mean its not like his a mini me or…anything.*he then sweatdropped*
Faker:ugh whatever…*hours went by until the very next day arived.everyone was still waiting very patiently except for Brenton who just fallen asleep.that is until the door finally starts to open revealing a little bit taller Bardock battered up covered in dirt and still a supersayain as for Piccolo he was much stronger.*
Bardock:mom? uncle Faker? well this is a surprise.*he then looked at his still passed out father with wide eyes*did something happened while i was gone?
*Brenton opened 1 eye and smiled*
Brenton:hey buddy you did great.*he then got up and stretched*
Bardock:really?
Brenton:of course.
Faker:i'll see you around kid.*he then flies to capsulecorp*
Brenton:*he then looked at Piccolo*thanks for the help.*he then put 2 fingers on his head and looked at Sakura* im gonna pick up Violet see you 2 at home.
Bardock:ooh can i come with you?
Brenton:sure buddy*he then put 1 hand on his sons shoulder and i'td to Kame house this causes Sakura to sigh*
Sakura:those 2 are always on the move.*at Kame house Brenton went wide-eyed as he saw Lazuli sun bathing in a bikini. this causes Bardock to look at him really confused. the demi-Sayain then composed himself and raise a eyebrow as he walked up to her*
Brenton:hey Lazuli im here to get Violet.
Lazuli:hmm? oh hey shes-
Violet:Bardock!*Violet glomped her big brother into a hug and started to giggle*you did it!
Brenton:come on you 2 i already told you.you both have the potential to do great things and i mean every word.Violet even if you couldn't i could care less because you are still my adorable little princess and nothing will change that.
Violet:really?
Brenton:*Brenton went on one knee and put his hand on her head*yeah so no rush alright?
Violet:ok.*meanwhile the turtle hermit climbed on top of his roof and looked through big binoculars at Lazuli*Master Roshi:heh heh look at that view.
Brenton:hmm?*Brenton then looked up at Roshi then at what he was looking at this causes his face to redden as his eyebrows twitch*
Bardock:dad? are you ok?
Brenton:ARE YOU FREAKING KIDDING ME ROSHI!!?*the loud voice surprised Lazuli and the turtle hermit*
Master Roshi:ga-hey!!*BOOM!* *the old master tripped over his roof and landed headfirst into sand*
Brenton:*mumbles as his eyebrows still twitch*serves you right you old perve…
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