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dragonsong12

on Dec. 26, 2011

Bonus Page!
Well hey, that's not supposed to happen!
I had intended for there to be a bonus page here, but to be honest, I had intended it for next week, not this week. The intent was to put the reveal and the explanation together, so you could make sense of it all at once. But then I realized that if I did that, all I'd be giving you for the holiday was the first half of this which is kind of boring, nonsensical, and doesn't advance much. So I decided to move the extra update to this week, since it does make an effective cliffhanger, I think. Explanation of what's going on here will be in next week's page.
This was a very difficult thing to explain, I can "see" how it all works in my head, but putting it into words is not easy. The dialogue here was rewritten many times, and I hope it makes sense. Though if it doesn't, I'm sure Agneris is having a little trouble explaining it too. These aren't easy things to explain to someone who has no idea what you're talking about. Which is why it's taken him a few days to master this pretty basic idea.
 
Anyway, bonus holiday page! I hope you had a Merry Christmas if you celebrated it, and if you didn't, I hope you had a fantastic December 25th anyway. See you next week to find out what the heck's going on here.