Thread "Comment on the Art Belonging to the Person Above You!!" in forum "Meet, Greet, Show and Sell*"

Posted at 6:04PM, Apr. 8, 2020

Avart wrote:
@Demas_Olich, I post my comments in your comic. While it's just a few pages your characters are well drawn and you aren't affraid of using diferent angles, which I like the most.

Now, I'm including this fairly recent art of my protagonist Usui Hitomi, which I like to give a punky-look that it's a perfect opportunity to show us her pierced tongue.

Hope you like it ;)

P.S. In this page of my comic I show the process of this art.

P.S.2 The kanji on her shirt reads 'heartless'

I really like your characters looks, she seems punkish, the type that I really adore and actually gave me some inspiration for me to design one of my charaters, Indyah Summers, for the upcoming volume I'm working on. Really loving the design! :)

For anyone wanting to critique or give feedback on character I made, here ya go! The art was made by Emmanuel for my character Stringy for Stringy and Mopy: The Adventure Begins #3. Tell me what you think. :D

Posted at 1:04AM, Apr. 11, 2020

I really like your characters looks, she seems punkish, the type that I really adore and actually gave me some inspiration for me to design one of my charaters, Indyah Summers, for the upcoming volume I'm working on. Really loving the design! :)

For anyone wanting to critique or give feedback on character I made, here ya go! The art was made by Emmanuel for my character Stringy for Stringy and Mopy: The Adventure Begins #3. Tell me what you think. :D

I really like the character design actually! She's got a distinctive silhouette.
For the art itself there is a lot I like: the pose/angle/expression are all great. Not that there's anything wrong with the shading, but stylistically I wish that the lighting was more striking or dramatic (like more backlighting).
I'm new so I don't know the rules here well enough to know how redlining/editing is taken so the best example of what I'm saying would be shading like this. I don't why I couldn't find a better example, but you get the idea.

I've only just started doing art again while I'm imprisoned at home but I'm determined to make a go of it again.
My first actual completed art in years is the cover of my new comic:

Posted at 6:05PM, May. 21, 2020

I actually love your art here! It's pretty unique and it kinda is the style I was looking for in a fairy tale adaptation I was working on a few days ago though. Really love it man! :)

Posted at 3:05PM, May. 26, 2020

MegaRdaniels wrote:
I actually love your art here! It's pretty unique and it kinda is the style I was looking for in a fairy tale adaptation I was working on a few days ago though. Really love it man! :)

I love your line art style, it's really crisp and just over all, way better than mine xD! Your character also looks really strong and heroic in this pose as well.

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I'm making a visual novel game for Cosmos Song so I've been pumping out some character art in the meantime. Here is a pic of one of them :].

Posted at 7:06PM, Jun. 6, 2020

I really love the ethnic art in your style. Really love the shading, the coloring and everything. Very crisp and clean and that your character does have a clear silhouette. Very nice art here! :)

Posted at 11:10AM, Oct. 24, 2020

Man, this is awesome! This girl is literally on fire. Really like the color composition and the blue background gives an eerie vibe and makes her shine. An outstanding job ;)

Now, talking about redheads and girls on fire… here's another art of Hitomi taking a selfie, originally she wasn't pulling down her shirt but meh! I think it's better like this XD.

BTW, the logo in her shirt is the japanese Pepsi logo.

Posted at 9:10PM, Oct. 24, 2020

Avart, thanks for resurrecting this!

Nice! Not sure if she's wearing anything under the shirt…for the imagination I guess :p (and for any SFW outlets LOL)

I am going to out myself as a weeb, but…from my limited knowledge of trying to learn Japanese from using Duolingo as a pandemic side hobby (I have been so bored during this whole thing)… her shirt reads in Katakana "shi pa pe" but said in reverse is "pep pa shi" or "Pepsi!" SO she must be taking a bathroom mirror selfie :p

I have several favorite katakana words…like "kurisimasu" (Christmas)…I am not sure if this forum will let me post katakana or not…

Anyway, here is some art I did this week inspired by a "drawtober" challenge on Instagram (themes were nature and sunset)

Posted at 10:11AM, Nov. 11, 2020

L.C.Stein wrote:
Avart, thanks for resurrecting this!

Nice! Not sure if she's wearing anything under the shirt…for the imagination I guess :p (and for any SFW outlets LOL)

I am going to out myself as a weeb, but…from my limited knowledge of trying to learn Japanese from using Duolingo as a pandemic side hobby (I have been so bored during this whole thing)… her shirt reads in Katakana "shi pa pe" but said in reverse is "pep pa shi" or "Pepsi!" SO she must be taking a bathroom mirror selfie :p

I have several favorite katakana words…like "kurisimasu" (Christmas)…I am not sure if this forum will let me post katakana or not…

Anyway, here is some art I did this week inspired by a "drawtober" challenge on Instagram (themes were nature and sunset)

Loving this! I love the composition and the environments here in this picture. It really pulls off the natural look of it all. Though, I kinda miss being on the lake with my pops, so it kinda gave me that nostalgic vibe lol. Again great job dude!

Posted at 8:11PM, Nov. 19, 2020

She looks pretty bad a**!

Posted at 6:01AM, Jan. 2, 2021

He looks like he is exerting a lot of force, ready to kick ALL SORTS OF ASS! Like he is working out to either win a championship at an MMA, wrestling, etc. Loving the colors and the designs of the character! :)

Posted at 6:02PM, Feb. 4, 2021

Someone's hungry! I like how she takes up the space of the page. It's very intimidating. She's kind of tall though, but that might have been deliberate. Also nice backgrounds, but maybe you could have used some tone or something to darken it. It's (a bit) distracting, to me at least.

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Posted at 8:02PM, Feb. 26, 2021

TENSA1 wrote:
Someone's hungry! I like how she takes up the space of the page. It's very intimidating. She's kind of tall though, but that might have been deliberate. Also nice backgrounds, but maybe you could have used some tone or something to darken it. It's (a bit) distracting, to me at least.

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Thanks! The page hadn't been colored in yet. It is now though. And I am really loving the water colors. Reminded me of Lilo Stitch a little bit and or one of those classic childrens books i used to read when i was a kid. It really brings me back.

It has that warm and nostalgic feeling pretty much. Loving the contrast of the colors.

And the serealness of it all looks badass! Amazing job!

Posted at 11:03PM, Mar. 20, 2021

MegaRdaniels wrote:
TENSA1 wrote:
Someone's hungry! I like how she takes up the space of the page. It's very intimidating. She's kind of tall though, but that might have been deliberate. Also nice backgrounds, but maybe you could have used some tone or something to darken it. It's (a bit) distracting, to me at least.

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Thanks! The page hadn't been colored in yet. It is now though. And I am really loving the water colors. Reminded me of Lilo Stitch a little bit and or one of those classic childrens books i used to read when i was a kid. It really brings me back.

It has that warm and nostalgic feeling pretty much. Loving the contrast of the colors.

And the serealness of it all looks badass! Amazing job!

Awesome work! Really impressive.

COSMIC SAFARI

Posted at 12:03AM, Mar. 24, 2021

Thanks! The page hadn't been colored in yet. It is now though. And I am really loving the water colors. Reminded me of Lilo Stitch a little bit and or one of those classic childrens books i used to read when i was a kid. It really brings me back.

It has that warm and nostalgic feeling pretty much. Loving the contrast of the colors.

And the serealness of it all looks badass! Amazing job!

Wow! This new style looks really awesome and professional. I'm glad your comic are doing so well ;)
The layout, angles and close ups are really top notch.

I'm going for a more simple art this time, here's Kokoro, just posing.

Posted at 5:04AM, Apr. 9, 2021

hawt ginger .. i would make her neck a little thinnner , but that's just me

Posted at 11:05AM, May. 28, 2021

Avart wrote:

I'm going for a more simple art this time, here's Kokoro, just posing.

That definitely doesn't look like a chair one would normally pull off a yoga position on. But it doesn't look like it's a problem for Kokoro here. Hell, she looks pretty darn fine doing it too^^ Also, love the subdued, warm color palette on this one. You're a damn good artist, Avart, is what I'm saying👍

Trying to become more active on these forums. This is a piece of artwork I posted on Newgrounds and Weasyl a week ago. Molly Lusc smoking in front of a window. One thing here that I'm really trying to get across with this piece is that in any contest about who'd look the most impressive blowing cigarette smoke from out of their nostrils, Molly with her flexible seal-nostrils would win that contest effortlessly.

Also, one thing I'd like to know from anyone who cares to comment on it, do you find Molly's dress or belt to be over-designed. The idea is that her trademark blue dress is supposed to be sown together from a blue, water-proof rain coat, so that when she merge herself into water, her dress isn't soaked when she gets back on dry land. I feel like I'm not getting that across here.

Posted at 6:04PM, Apr. 1, 2022

Trying to become more active on these forums. This is a piece of artwork I posted on Newgrounds and Weasyl a week ago. Molly Lusc smoking in front of a window. One thing here that I'm really trying to get across with this piece is that in any contest about who'd look the most impressive blowing cigarette smoke from out of their nostrils, Molly with her flexible seal-nostrils would win that contest effortlessly.

Also, one thing I'd like to know from anyone who cares to comment on it, do you find Molly's dress or belt to be over-designed. The idea is that her trademark blue dress is supposed to be sown together from a blue, water-proof rain coat, so that when she merge herself into water, her dress isn't soaked when she gets back on dry land. I feel like I'm not getting that across here

I get what you're saying! Rain coats have a lot of stitch lines so I would suggest adding that. But if it was a repurposed rain coat, perhaps fine a style of rain coat you like and use elements of that to build the dress? Literally deconstruct it and reconstruct it how you see fit. Because if you didn't say rain coat, I was thinking the dress was more like part of her body like a lizard. So it should have some elements of rain coat aesthetics! Also, rain coats have this plastic feel to it so you should have some bright highlights to showcase that.

But she's really cute regardless, the belt is really unique and should have more emphasis! It's all about the accessories after all.

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My mine gripe with my art is my coloring. I'm trying to get better at using colors and doing shadows/highlights but I still feel so flat. I don't like softer line art for some reason so maybe that's what's hurting me or if I should find a different coloring style. But regardless, I love how the pose came out and her outfit is super cute. And birds….I'm not good with animals lol

Posted at 7:08AM, Aug. 9, 2022

There are two above me one is what seems to be a black pig monster smoking in a noir setting. (It looks cool) the other seems to be a forum pic of a girl in a pink dress they both look very good.

The composition on the first drawing is really good I like the nonchalant but anxious pose she's making implying it's been a very long day in the monster's life it feels very human. There's probably some deep sub text in there about how monsters have people traits or how people aren't much different from monsters in a sense.

EDIT I figured out how to put images on here yay! here's a panel from my web series ^^;. I plan to mirror it on here but i'm in the middle of redoing the backgrounds so you folks will get to see the remastered versions of panels first even though i'm further ahead on webtoons atm ^^;.

Hawk and Flo1: Ice Cream Truck of Doom!...

Posted at 6:08PM, Aug. 19, 2022

Gooey! And colorful!

Posted at 8:08AM, Aug. 24, 2022

Cthulu lives! (Sorry if it isn't) I like the linework and beefiness of this monster. Always a fan of clean linework.

Posted at 12:03PM, Mar. 30, 2023

Love the old black and white art! Reminds me of old shonen comics.

Here's my comic:
https://tapas.io/series/That-Stick-Figure-Isekai/info

Posted at 12:06PM, Jun. 22, 2023

I Like your Art Style of The real world. Can See The effort in it. I also Like The Idea that a Dude Lands into a stickman-world.

And Here is a weird way to present a Comic. (Actually to represent 1 character and its properties + The bullshit I got in my head.) But why Not lol

Posted at 7:07PM, Jul. 16, 2023

Jesse_Koehler wrote:
I Like your Art Style of The real world. Can See The effort in it. I also Like The Idea that a Dude Lands into a stickman-world.

And Here is a weird way to present a Comic. (Actually to represent 1 character and its properties + The bullshit I got in my head.) But why Not lol

THAT'S A CUTE LITTLE KITTY!

https://imgur.com/a/7hgPZTY

MY ART