I dig this comic, I like the colored bubbles in the pages. Also, the dialogue flows well.
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First thing I notice is the main character is designed well and has a deal of thought put into her. April's emotions are very easy to read and you provide a keen insight into the way she thinks with your use of thought bubbles.
I can also tell how much you have improved from the start. This is one of my favorite parts of looking at other's comics. Now you are starting to tackle some hair shine. Soon I bet you will start trying to add shade in more spots. It's a vicious cycle of "Hey that looks good, I wonder what would happen if I did this not".
That has been a LONG day for poor April.
I have to say your strongest point is definitely characterization. The faces, body language, and all the insight into April's mind really helps you know and relate to her quickly.
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