Brenton:honestly? it feels like i could beat them in a game of basketball.(seriously most days i forget i'm training with adult aged aliens since they look like teenagers.honestly even Vegeta is taller then these guys!)*he then sweatdropped as he imagined what could happen if he said those words outloud in front of Vegeta*i'll admit training Caulifla isn't easy.she is like a younger and more intense version of you Shallot…except everytime we train she keeps asking me to teach her Ultra Instinct even though i haven't mastered it yet.
Shallot:it sounds like you just keep digging your grave with that 1.
Brenton:not really…i mean not counting her many flaws she has a lot of hidden potential that hasn't been tapped yet…i even got her to start using god ki.
Shallot:great another 1 that can use that red haired form…
Brenton:and i guess i feel a sense of pride or accomplishment towards her everytime both her and Kale beat 1 of my lessons.(huh i guess i kinda adapted to the whole martial arts master roll when it comes to Caulifla. i mean Vegeta has Cabba right? so why shouldn't i have a student that i'm proud to call my own?)*the half breed smiled in content*
Caulifla:GALICK CANON!!!!!
Alex:wait did she just say-*suddenly she fired multiple red beams out of her hand making Bardock dodge.she then used the distraction to try and strike him but as her fist was about to land on him he vanished*
Caulifla:where did the punk go!?
Bardock:up here!*as she looked up she saw him charge a familiar technique in his fist.*DRAGONFIST!!!!*he flew down as Shenron temporarily took his place and bite down on Caulifla but this made Caulifla smirk as she blocked the attack as Bardock appeared*
Caulifla:nice try kid but your dad used that move on me already.
Bardock:the name is…Bardock!*as he said his name he turned into a Supersaiyan2 and landed a swift kick to Cauliflas face giving her a small scratch and knocked her back a few feet as she bled slightly.this made Caulifla smile*
Yang:you got this Bardock!
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Kale: you got this Caulifla!
Caulifla: you know you're the second person to get me to bleed. Congrats but we're not finished here*fires several blasts then rushes in for a flurry of blows*
Kale:Caulifla seems to be getting serious now.
Yang: Bardock can handle it. He's fought things wilder than her.
Shallot: well she can hold her own against your kid I can say that much. Still, makes me wonder what she'll do with all that power. I mean let's face it, with all those new transformations as of right now, I doubt there's anyone who can stop her outside of us.
Sakura: oh she wouldn't do that…would she?
Shallot:*shrugs* Im not a mind reader. Just an observer. speaking off where did your kid run off to?
Sakura:*looks around* I don't know. She was right here a moment ago… Brenton have you seen Violet?
Brenton:*the half breed scratch his cheek looking confused*she's probably in my house looking for a snack.i didn't exactly have time to make a little snack table for the kids.*he then walked inside with a smirk on his face as he watch his daughter eat a pastry from the fridge*ahem!
Violet:oh uh hi Daddy…
Brenton:some things never change huh?
Violet:heh heh heh.
Brenton:sigh alright sweet tooth lets clean you up.then id say its time for some games.*he then scooped her up and gave her a piggyback ride*uh you aren't too old for that are you Vie?
Violet:well i am 12 now but…i don't think so?
Brenton:(12?! damn my baby girl is growing up too fast!)*hearing this made Brenton sweatdrop*
Violet:are you alright daddy?
Brenton:uh yeah… now lets get you cleaned up before you make your mother worry anymore.*a few minutes later he walked out making Sakura feel relieved*
Sakura:there you are Violet! where was she?
Brenton:i found our little Raccoon in my fridge.*he then ruffled her hair as he hugged her making Violet giggle*
Violet:hahahaha! Daddy stop you're embarrassing me.
Shallot:(i'll give the moron points for good parenting. makes me wonder if Alex would be the same way with or without the secret experiment.)
Bardock:*Bardock anticipated her attack and began to dodge each strike as he smiled in a carefree manner*i gotta admit i can see why Dad would want to train you.but can you handle being surrounded!
Caulifla:huh?*Bardock fired multiple ki blasts allowing Caulifla to jump away and dodge each blast*hah! you gotta land 1 of those if you wish to beat me runt!*
Bardock:heh…*Bardock smirked as his ki blasts stopped moving making a cage around Caulifla* HELLZONE GRENADE!!!!!*they exploded 1 by 1 so Caulifla had to block by covering her body in ki and as soon as Bardock finished and the eventual dust cleared a smiling Caulifla flew in about to punch him but then stopped and instead slapped him in the back*
Caulifla:whoa you really surprised me ki-er Bardock!*both Yang and Kale sigh in relief glad the spar didn't get out of hand*next time you guys come over i'll train you and make sure you become even stronger!*Bardock blushed lightly as he rubbed the back of his head*
Bardock:s-sure! that would be awesome!
Yang:grr….come on casanova i'm hungry!*she then pulled his ear as they walked leaving a confused Caulifla*
Bardock:ow! ow! ow! come on Yang it's not like that! ow!!
Brenton:(unless Sakura made them herself i'm starting to think she made friends with a bakery.)well what are you waiting for kiddo? blowout the candles and make a wish.*as she did so everyone cheered.*
Bardock:(heh too bad blowing out candles isn't the same as using the dragonballs. i'm sure Violet would wish for a Unicorn or something.)*everyone then ate the cake.the party was a huge success and everyone had to leave*
Violet:i'm gonna miss you Daddy.
Brenton:hey chin-up after all it'll only be for a few more months i swear…wait here.*he then ran inside his house everyone could hear his distraught noises like. "grrr!!!" "where did i put that thing!?" and "HAH! there you are you son of a-!!" he then ran back outside with a box shaped present covered in chibi version of his head for wrapping paper*here you go Vie.open that when you get home alright? and whenever you miss me just look at your present and everything will be alright okay?.
Violet:okay.
Brenton:that's my girl.*they then hugged and then they left via Whis.the next day Alice made a request to get Android 16 and 22(Data) so she could fine tune them to being able to train with Brenton at his current level*
Alice:i hope this works.
Brenton:of course it will your 1 of the 2 smartest women in Universe 7.i have complete faith in your abilities.
Brenton:oh well id be lying if i didn't say i wasn't doing it for a selfish reason…*he sweatdropped* you see Data theirs these 2 Saiyans named Kale and Caulifla and well i've been sorta teaching them sorta like a mentor the past 6 months.
Data:i see…and do you need my assistance with training them?
Brenton:well yeah if you don't mind after all Android or not it is still your choice.
Data:then i will get on it as soon as i am done updating my schematics
Brenton:uh great!*Brenton then decided to give Alice some breathing room by meditating outside the house.as he meditated he was image training as he was imagining he was fighting a old foe as Merged Zamasu appeared as he tried to stab him but he dodged.*(grr Zamasu…)*looking at the Kai fusion brought back bad memories as Brenton felt angry*
Fake Zamasu:perish Timepatroller!!!
Brenton:grr gwah!*they then began to clash*
*Caulifla and Kale floated down and saw the half breed looking like he was stressing out while he meditated*
Kale:Brenton? are you okay?
Brenton:….
Caulifla:hey wake-up!
Brenton:whoa!*he then tried to catch his breath*you gotta….stop doing that.
Caulifla: well, you know if you keep sleeping with yer eyes open like that maybe you'd see me coming.*grins*
Kale:Caulifla, please be nice. he's done so much for us.
Caulifla: yeha yeah.*points*so what the heck are these two?
Alice: oh, that's 16 and data. They're here to aid in your training.
Caulifla:a rustbucket ginger and some weak looking Android is gonna help us? i feel like you're underestimating me.
Brenton:don't let their appearance fool you.16 was originally designed to kill Goku back in the day.and as for Data well…you'll just have to spar with her to find out.
Caulifla:grr….fine whatever.*an hour later*
16/Data:diagnostics complete.*they then stand up making Caulifla whistle*
Caulifla:he is tall i'll give him that.but that's about it.
Brenton:(what did i just say about not judging them by their appearance?…sigh whatever.)alright shrimp lets get this started!*he then smiled widely*theirs just 1 little rule i have to put on…don't use your god form alright?
Caulifla:what!? why not?
Brenton:because i don't want you going overboard by destroying 16.besides he is very important to me and even more to Alice so no god form!…think of it as a handicap.
Caulifla:grr fine.
Brenton:so what do you think big guy? i know you don't like the idea of fighting anyone but dad but-
16:i understand.
Brenton:good to hear.okay let's start with a quick spar.*the half breed laid down on the ground relaxing*Data spar with Kale 16 with Caulifla.
Data:yes sir.*she then bowed respectively to Kale*
Caulifla/Kale:HAAAAAA!!!!!!*they charged and clashed at their respective opponents. Alice sat down next to Brenton looking worried making her instinctively play with his hair.*
Alice:are you sure this was a good idea?
Brenton:don't worry if it gets out of hand i'll stop the fight before anything really serious happens.*as he watched he noted 16 was much faster.*(his green armor still looks pretty heavy though.)you know i think i'll go fishing when they're done training for the day. the weather is just perfect for it.
*Brenton even as his eyes were closed he could feel her having trouble. so he decided to assist*
Brenton:Data!(how should i say this so that she could understand?)decrease fighting output by 20%?…
Data:yes master Son.*she then moved at a slower pace allowing Kale to defend and counter Datas movements*
Brenton:phew…*he sighed in relief*(if Kale or Caulifla get seriously injured because of my carelessness then i would feel really guilty.)anyway they should have a pond or a lake we can fish somewhere. after all i saw 1 of the locals selling fresh fish in the market i just haven't gotten around to asking him.
Alice:huh.*a few hours later Brenton fell asleep on Alices lap as Kale and Caulifla while transformed floated down*Brenton wake-up they're done.
Brenton:YAWN! thanks for the heads up.*he then stand up and stretched*you 2 did great! i can feel that you are improving quite a lot.how about you both take a few days off from training? it'll do your body good.
Caulifla:sure come on Kale.*they then flew away*
Brenton:huh…(she didn't argue with me that's a good sign.)well those fishes aren't gonna bite themselves!(probably…)*they then got directions at the market and found the perfect lake as Brenton sat down and used his fishing rod whistling a happy tune.this made Alice smile while the half breed relaxed*
Data:i wonder what is the point of this "fishing" Mr.Son already has a kitchen full of food.
16:some people like fishing for its tranquil aspects…the quiet surroundings the smell of the ocean. maybe even the company it depends.
Brenton:i got it!*Brenton pulled the fishingrod with great difficulty*(it must ge a big 1!*he then stopped pulling it*
Alice:what are you doing? just reel it in.
Brenton:wait for it…now!*they then pulled the fishing rod together making a giant blue fish with sharp teeth jump towards Brenton and bite down on him*
Alice:Brenton!
Brenton:*suddenly teeth started to fly out of the fishes mouth making it have X's for eyes as Brenton jump out of it*i never had a fish eat me before…talk about going full circle.hahaha!*he then laughed awkwardly as he rubbed the back of his head*
Brenton:sweet fish? that sounds so bizzare but i suppose its a possibility.what's that saying? everything is relative?
Alice:exactly.but uh how are we gonna deal with moby over here?
Brenton:the best thing i can do is cut it into normal sized pieces and put them in the freezer.16. Data.we're heading back!* a few hours later it was night time as Alice sees Brenton punching and kicking the air*hah! hiyah! kiyah! grah! hiyah! HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!*he then turned into a Supersaiyanblue and trained at a faster rate*
Alice:you shouldn't over do it in your training.
Brenton;i shouldn't be waiting for the badguy to try and kidnap you or attack anyone here either.(that's not even mentioning the fact i also have kept a eye on my family thanks to my scroll.although i gotta give Fu props for having enough honour to not use my family against me.)
Alice: oh come on brenton, im skilled…sorta. Plus, im pretty sure no one will try to kidnap me. I mean, sure they pop into this dimension time to time, but Im sure the gods are now watching, now knowing that there are dimensional interlopers breaching in to come after you.
* the halfbreed scratch his head looking unsure*
Brenton:true but i dunno….id be more comfortable if i *yawns* trained all night.
Alice:hmm…*she then grabbed him and pulled him as they walked inside the house.*no you look very tired.i think you should get some rest.*the next day the pink android woke up to a loud noise*
Brenton:ZZZZZZZZZZZZ*snort* mmmm look at the size of that pizza…*hearing this made the android giggle before kissing his cheek and getting up to get dressed*
Alice:(i'll let him sleep in for a bit longer.)*she then sat at her computer and began to type*16! could you make sure Caulifla doesn't interrupt Brentons sleep?
16:request confirmed.i'll wait outside.*he then walked outside*
Brenton:zzzzzzzz……of course i'm strong enough to save you for i'm the SupremeSaiyaman…
Alice:*listens in to his sleep rambles and smiles as she continues typing* (what am I to do with you)*looks over and stops typing for a moment*…*heads over to him and begins to smile. she goes to peck on the cheek, but-*
Data: Alice, I have finished analyzing the flora and fauna in this region.
Alice: oh! um, good work data. I'd like to analyze it right now.
Data: certainly. Is brenton alright you seemed to have seen something on his face.
Alice: oh! um*blushes* I was just making sure that he didn't haven't any extra wounds around his head.
Data: head wounds can be serious, should I scan him to make sure there's nothing internal?
Alice: that won't be necessary. come on over, I want to upload what you have on this world.
Data:yes ma'am.*Alice then hooked up Data wirelessly through her computer*transferring current file on Universe6…*the transfer took awhile to process but an hour later-*
Alice:lets see…its universe 7's twin with different life choices compared to our universe…it most likely has more life forms due to the absence of both Friezas family and Majin Buu…so far so good.*suddenly the pictures of many unique plants appear on screen*
good. now lets just see if i can download all of her progress into a separate file.
Brenton:YAWN!*they turned around and saw a sleepy Brenton walk up to them*morning Data good morning Alice*he then affectingly rubbed Datas hair and kiss Alices cheek before slowly walking to the kitchen.this surprised Data*(need….coffee.)yawn…man i haven't been this tired since Violet was a baby.
Data:mr.Son is your head okay?*the question confused the half breed as he took his first sip of coffee it also made Alice go wide-eyed*
Brenton:uh yeah? i mean last i check i feel fine…why?
Data:it's just that i saw Alice closely examining your face and-
Alice:*Alice covered Datas mouth as she blushed confusing the half breed*nevermind that!
Brenton:hahaha!*he then smiled as he put his head on Alices as he put his hand on her hair*it's okay Alice.*and then went outside to stretch*
Brenton:sheesh now that i think about it i don't really do much besides those few things huh?,,, how about we hang out on Earth again? i like Sadala and all but their isn't exactly a lot of fun things to do.
Alice:sure just let me get ready*30 minutes later the half breed was about to doze off but he then shook himself awake*
Brenton:come on Alice! do you really need to take so long? i mean women like you and Sakura don't even need make up to look pretty so what's the hold up?*she then opened the door wearing a casual outfit consisting of Denim Jeans a white shirt and black shoes*
Alice:that's sweet of you to say but i still had to do some finishing touches.
Brenton:Data we'll be out for a few hours so do whatever you want but at the same time stay safe alright?.
Data:yes Mr.Son.*Brenton then teleport himself and Alice to Earth*
Alice:so what's the plan? movies? getting a big meal at a restaurant? ooh how about we go dancing?
Brenton:to be honest i haven't really thought that far ahead…*the half breed blushed as he scratch his cheek* *RUMBLE!*but i guess i did miss breakfast.
Alice:hmm look at this.*as they were walking Alice saw a poster for a Ramen eating contest*you should enter it!
Brenton:i guess it couldn't hurt to give it a shot.
Brenton:of course i will…although i can't help but feel that i'm kinda cheating.you know with my uh let's just call it a alien appetite.
Alice:come on it'll be fun plus don't you wanna win the prize?
Brenton:prize? what prize?
Alice:$500,000? so they call their money dollars on this Earth,
Brenton:(that does sound like a lot of money.)alright lets do this.*20 minutes later Brenton with 4 people consisting of a Sumo Wrestler. a texan Cowgirl. a business man and a old lady were sitting next to him. the announcer for the little event was about to prep everything up*
Announcer:hello everyone and welcome to the halo Ramen eating contest.remember if it doesn't taste heavenly it ain't worth your time now we are still preparing everything so please just wait 5 more minutes.
Brenton:(i know this is silly but i still feel so nervous.)*he then sweatdropped as the Sumo wrestler glared at him*
*the Cowgirl smiled as she looked at the seat next to hers*
Cowgirl:first food eating contest handsome?
Brenton:is it that obvious?
Cowgirl:don't worry everyone has their first time jitters.it's like a initiation of sorts like branding your first cow. you got nothen to worry about.
Brenton:uh thanks the name is Brenton.
Cowgirl:Alexia.*they then shook hands as Brenton smiled widely* so why did you enter? the money right?
Brenton:actually…i'm just really hungry.*this answer threw Alexia off*
Alexia:hahaha! you're alright Brenton!*she then slapped his back making him laugh in response*
Alice:good luck Brenton!*Brenton turned around and did a thumbs-up to Alice*
*the old lady calmly and slowly slurp her ramen while the business mans phone rang so he stands up and walked away. as for the Sumo wrestler he ignored how hot the food was and simply gulp the food down quickly.and as for Brenton he was already on his 10th bowl this made everyone stare at him like he had a second head*
Shop owner:(this kid is gonna end up eat my entire stock…)*just 10 minutes later the Sumo wrestler passed out while the old lady was still on her first bowl while Alexia ate 16 bowls and Brenton ate 80.Alexia calmly grabbed a napkin wiped her mouth and raised her hand*
Alexia:i give up.
Shop owner:huh i guess that means the young man wins!
Brenton:heh heh..*the half breed looked nervous as he rubbed the back of his head seeing Alice take a pictur of this moment*
Alexia:that is some iron stomach you got their.*she then wrapped a arm around his shoulder making Brenton scratch his cheek as he laughed*
Brenton:thanks.
Shop owner:heres your prize money.*he then showed a suitcase full of cash* but what happened next surprised everyone*
Brenton:thanks…*as he was given the money he gave the suitcase to Alexia*but no thanks.
Shop owner:w-what? but why!?
Brenton:i don't need it.*he then smiled at Alexia* make sure you put that money to good use.
Alexia:you continue to surprise me!*she then hugged him making Brenton sweatdrop as he scratch his cheek*thank you so much!
Brenton:heh heh no problem…*Alice then walked up to him*
Alice:that was very sweet of you Brenton.
Alexia:hmm? is this your girl cowpoke?
Brenton:heh yep! Alexia this is Alice.
Alice:it is nice to meet you.*she then bow respectively but then was surprised as Alexia hugged her*
Alexia:the 1 thing you should know about me i'm a hugger.*Brenton laughed awkwardly at the situation until he heard and saw a police chase happening as a black sedan had 4 criminals shooting at the cops*
Brenton:ow!!*Brenton then held onto his stomach*
Alice:are you okay Brent?
Brenton:i uh just need to use the bathroom. i think i had too many bowls…hahaha.*he then ran to a random alleyway making Alice smile as both women saw the SupremeSaiyaman fly to where the crime was happening.*
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