Thread "Redux: Did you just update? Tell us why someone should visit your comic. But ONLY AFTER commenting about the comic BEFORE yours. ^_^" in forum "Meet, Greet, Show and Sell*"

Posted at 4:11PM, Nov. 16, 2011

While "Without Moonlight" is not the style of comic I generally follow, I do like what looks like free-hand illustration versus something computer-generated. I also like the fact that you let your characters talk. Lots of dialogue…as a writer, I love works that have have hefty dialogue, as long as it's interesting…and it looks like this comic has this trait.
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2-page update for "The True Masters Chronicles!" A public judgement and a rescue!
http://bit.ly/oViqt5

Posted at 7:11PM, Nov. 17, 2011

@True Masters - How nice… saved by the dad. :)
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MAG-ISA updates today:
http://www.drunkduck.com/MAG_ISA/5366842/
- Eman gets a little break from getting his butt kicked.

Posted at 11:11PM, Nov. 17, 2011

She likes crunchy so much she should eat some crunchy nut corn flakes… well maybe she's had too many as she IS a NUT JOB. That really has to be the longest fight in a web comic ever.
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In B.A.S.O. Stavlov is in trouble…
http://www.drunkduck.com/BASO/

Posted at 11:11PM, Nov. 17, 2011

She likes crunchy so much she should eat some crunchy nut corn flakes… well maybe she's had too many as she IS a NUT JOB. That really has to be the longest fight in a web comic ever.
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In B.A.S.O. Stavlov is in trouble…
http://www.drunkduck.com/BASO/

Posted at 7:11AM, Nov. 20, 2011

@BASO - nice splatter in the last panel.
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MAG-ISA
http://www.drunkduck.com/MAG_ISA/5367186/
- we interrupt this fight for a message from the puppet masters…

Posted at 6:11PM, Nov. 20, 2011

You've got a lot of cool effects going on in this page, yet it doesn't distract the reader. Good work!
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Also you should go check Elements since I've finally obtained a computer that doesn't have a 100% failure rate and can go back to updating regularly.

Posted at 5:11AM, Nov. 22, 2011

It seems nothing has changed with elements, that is likely a good thing. I wish you will in gettting back into the swing of things.
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In B.A.S.O. Stavlov makes plans.
http://www.drunkduck.com/BASO/

Posted at 8:11AM, Nov. 22, 2011

B.A.S.O.- seems like something darring is about to happen, apperantly he's not betting on having that jet thing when this's over. Motova'll have to bite it.
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PUTRID MEAT- updates with an end to the domestic despute between bones and his so called, Exis appointed wifey.according to her, they're to end up as some kind of tastey treat.
http://www.drunkduck.com/PUTRID_MEAT/5367476/

Posted at 3:11PM, Nov. 23, 2011

Good illustration. Reminds me of "Heavy Metal"…ol' school animation.
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1-pager for True Masters. Blasts from our pasts tell us A LOT about who we once were…
http://bit.ly/oViqt5

Posted at 4:11PM, Nov. 23, 2011

'Masters would SO benefit from color - even if it was just a primary palette. I'm a big color fan. Only like B&W when there is broad tone of shading. Otherwise, the drawing's O.K. I was surprised there weren't more pages, as I thought it had been around for a while…
O.K. Liquid Lunch and Little Black Dress are (hopefully) both updating at around the 3-4 day mark. PLus I've got back to doing Birdman and ditto for that.
http://www.drunkduck.com/Liquid_Lunch/
http://www.drunkduck.com/Little_Black_Dress/
http://www.drunkduck.com/Birdman/

Posted at 7:11PM, Nov. 23, 2011

Liquid Lunch looks pretty intriguing! I glanced at a few pages prior to the updated one as well, and it's very well-paced and easy to understand. I've got only one critique, and that's that coloring's a little bit rough.
The same for Little Black Dress, but I do enjoy the use of various angles and shots! It keeps the dialogue from seeming too boring or plain.
All in all, quite good.
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My own comic's quite new (only three pages in, haha), but here; http://www.drunkduck.com/And_So_They_Came/
Only three pages in, and a chase scene already!

Posted at 6:11PM, Nov. 24, 2011

Re: And so they came
-nice way to begin a comic. Who let the dogs out? (or who made the dog sound?)
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MAG-ISA updates today:
http://www.drunkduck.com/MAG_ISA/5367970/
- pretty straightforward… nuff said. :)

Posted at 6:11AM, Nov. 25, 2011

Haven't read Mag-Isa in a long while but that first panel kinda freaked me out a bit. None the less the sequentials are well laid out.

http://www.drunkduck.com/The_Beast_Legion/5368021/
updates with a new page, as Aquanox, The king of Subtopia is revealed.

Posted at 9:11PM, Nov. 27, 2011

@Beast Legion - the king sure looks scared… Nice battle sequences in previous pages.
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MAG-ISA updates today:
http://www.drunkduck.com/MAG_ISA/5368323/
- In today's update, we have a little romance… :)

Posted at 3:11AM, Nov. 28, 2011

The flashbacks are done really well, the warm colours and soft lines work wonders.
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In BASO Stavlov gets a ride.
http://www.drunkduck.com/BASO/

Posted at 8:11AM, Nov. 28, 2011

Nice vehicle design on this BASO page, and I think I've mentioned this before, but I really like how you're avoiding the usual glaringly-mismatched look a lot of 3D rendered webcomics have. Your pages are actually well designed and cohesive.
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Bulletproof (link in sig) updates today with the beginning of a new chapter. I decided to kick things off with a severed head. Just, y'know, seemed like a good place to start.

Posted at 1:11AM, Nov. 29, 2011

@Spacehamster really enjoyed reading Bulletproof! I read all of issue five and the beginning of six before writing this review.
The art flows really well with the story, and you have a good eye as to different camera angles and keeping panels fresh. Lots of action and good use of sound effects in the backgrounds of the panels!
I am heading back over to Bulletproof immediately and reading from the beginning. Great job, keep up the great work!

Posted at 5:11AM, Nov. 29, 2011

You forgot to pimp your own comic.
http://www.drunkduck.com/ADAM_Online/5361780/
I took one look at the new page and had to see what it was about. Really like the art style and you waste no time in getting going. Really nice art too.
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Double dose.
In B.A.S.O. Motovo explains a few things to Stavlov.
http://www.drunkduck.com/BASO/
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In The Hero Factor we see Bubble-fro's first audition.
http://www.drunkduck.com/The_Hero_Factor/

Posted at 3:12AM, Dec. 3, 2011

Is this thread broken for anyone else? When I try to click on the last post link on the right, I get an error message, only clicking on the last page link works. Plus nobody's posted anything in three days. Do we maybe need to start a new one because this one's too long?

Posted at 11:12PM, Dec. 3, 2011

there are still a lot of functions on this site that aren't working quite right, but starting a new one wouldn't hurt but best get one of the admins to sticky it and lock this one.

Posted at 9:12AM, Dec. 5, 2011

*sigh*
Mods? Hello?

Posted at 4:12PM, Dec. 5, 2011

spacehamster wrote:
*sigh*
Mods? Hello?

This comic looks phenomenal and Spacey here seems to have a thorough understanding of noir and the science of black and white sequential art.

Posted at 12:12PM, Dec. 7, 2011

Not sure if we're still doing this or not but I'll give it a whirl anyway…
Vindibudd, I'm not sure what comic to critique, so I just picked one out of your lineup…Perry Penguin. First off, I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE comic strips!! They were my first introduction to comics as a child…Sunday comics while eating a bowl of Frosted Flakes…priceless, and VERY comfortable memories from my childhood. Love the colors in your comic as well as the witty dialogue. Here's another example of me giving respect to someone for something I haven't been able to master as of yet…fitting in a full arc into 4 panels. Can't do it…as you see, I'm a bit long-winded and love to write long sweeping dialogue. The true mastery of this art however is to be able to condense the prose down, make your statement(s) with minimal words and let the artwork assist in telling the story. Still working on it, but major kudos for what seems to be a good handle on this skill!
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2-page update since I last posted on here for True Masters. The DRAMA begins!
http://bit.ly/oViqt5

Posted at 11:12PM, Dec. 7, 2011

swoobie wrote:
Not sure if we're still doing this or not but I'll give it a whirl anyway…
Vindibudd, I'm not sure what comic to critique, so I just picked one out of your lineup…Perry Penguin. First off, I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE comic strips!! They were my first introduction to comics as a child…Sunday comics while eating a bowl of Frosted Flakes…priceless, and VERY comfortable memories from my childhood. Love the colors in your comic as well as the witty dialogue. Here's another example of me giving respect to someone for something I haven't been able to master as of yet…fitting in a full arc into 4 panels. Can't do it…as you see, I'm a bit long-winded and love to write long sweeping dialogue. The true mastery of this art however is to be able to condense the prose down, make your statement(s) with minimal words and let the artwork assist in telling the story. Still working on it, but major kudos for what seems to be a good handle on this skill!
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2-page update since I last posted on here for True Masters. The DRAMA begins!
http://bit.ly/oViqt5

hahaha well thank you, actually Vindibudd is the main comic. You can go to vindibudd.com to get most of the latest updates, because the very latest update is the first one on DD in a while.

Posted at 7:12PM, Dec. 8, 2011

@Vindibudd = power of sarcasm? I have that as well. And I used to piss off alot of people back in the days of the great ninja flame wars. hahahahaha.
@True Masters = awww she's cute. ^^
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MAG-ISA updates today… Lucia talks about… philosophy. ^^
http://www.drunkduck.com/MAG_ISA/5369704/