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I little work to imprve the presentation wouldn't hurt.  I can't say I get the joke either. sorry.
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In B.A.S.O. we have what Bravo referred to as a hardware page.
http://www.drunkduck.com/BASO/

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a hardware page indeed! and i have to applaud that cuz i know for me anyways, i lack the patience to ever do those things or at least in great detail. so i give ya applause for that.
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Brave Resistance updates with Hynter meeting his savior…the ram apperantly. 
http://www.drunkduck.com/Brave_Resistance/

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This page perfectly captures that disorientation when one comes out of anesthesia (particularly with the question of one Dr Ram).  Nice job!!
 

 
At long last, the 2011 Druck Duck Radio Play comic is complete - with heartfelt thanks to many.

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Definitely an original idea on how the names were displayed.  Could've been pretty boring with all the text, but the way it was presented was creative and interesting.  Always a challenge to make assembled text interesting, so kudos to whomever thought of the idea and put it together.
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Another 2-page update for The True Masters Chronicles.  Things escalate, and finally we get our first peak at some ACTION!!!
http://bit.ly/oViqt5

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@True Masters Chronicles = nice fight scene.  Though personally, I'd put more speedlines and motion blurs. 
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MAG-ISA updates today…  Eman Cruz gets memory flashbacks of Nazi Germany
http://www.drunkduck.com/MAG_ISA/5363609/

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how could the nazis be working on ufos? they wouldn't exactly be unidentified flying objects if they were the ones making them. :D
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In B.A.S.O. Jonathon gets a dressing down.
http://www.drunkduck.com/BASO/

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Illustrations/graphis look great.  Think there's a punctuation typo…looks like a comma in the second panel after "I am".  Think it should be a period.  Other than that, good work!
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1-page update for True Masters this week!  Two opposing forces, finally face-to-face…
http://bit.ly/oViqt5

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I like the first panel on Jonathan 1:2.  The storyline is looking real good :).
Due to recent internet troubles, I haven't been able to update Skooland but now everything fine again.  Three pages have been added.

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Anthropomorphic Pencils…now I've seen it all. I dig your choice of character design, looks promising. Definitely going to backtrack to see what all the drama between Danny and Jet is all about.

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The art on Autumn blood is really well done, although I'm not a fan of the style.  One crit though, the speech bubble placement on the latest page isn't that eay to follow.
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In BASO we have a dialogue free page as things go pear shaped.
http://www.drunkduck.com/BASO/

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@BASO -Nice flow of action.  At first sight, it looks like a laser gun but the BLAM is something else.  :)
Btw, "BASO" means "glass" in Tagalog.
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MAG-ISA updates today.  
http://www.drunkduck.com/MAG_ISA/5365146/
Lucia begins to beat up Eman… 

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On MAG_ISA, I really want to touch up on this comic since I used to read it and Eman is getting his ass handed to him by one hot babe. Hey, if I were him, I would stay down… lol :p
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On Electronic Revolutions: The Burnhams Burnhams are back with some action… Bosser is evil as always… look how cute he is! :p

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Good job on you use of facial expressions on your characters. Conveying proper emotion is essential in good cartooning.
I'm completely new to this business of webcomics, and this site. My comic strip "Boozer & Stoner" spun out of my mini comics. They've been around for years, but this is the first time I'm pushing them out into the world.
You can check my strip out here: http://www.drunkduck.com/Boozer_and_Stoner

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Very simple art but it works, I also like that you don't stop with the first joke but take it a little further. 
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In Lite bites the story by Jake Richmond, creator of Modest medusa wraps up today.
http://www.drunkduck.com/Lite_bites/

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@genejoke;  Hey really like the coloring on this.  The lettering is also some of the best ive seen in a webcomic in a while
i haven't posted my updates on here in a while so finally heres a new one.  As always some of them have dirty language, potty humor, you know, all the good stuff.
http://onepanelsideshow.com/
 

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@Superamazing66 Funny stuff there! You're really good at making humorous comic strips :) Hope to see more ;)
Skooland has yet another update with three pages.

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I like the general idea of the comic…the school supplies being the characters.  Your paneling sequences are good, however I'd advise to make more room for your dialogue bubbles.  Some of them are pretty small and a bit hard to read.  Looks like Page 43 didn't upload…unless I'm missing something.  Your comic page link at the bottom of your forum post didn't work as well.  I had to go to your profile to actually get to the comic page.  Don't know what the problem is, but when my page link wasn't working, someone told me about a link-shortner and it did the trick.  I use this shortner:  https://bitly.com/
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One-page update for "The True Masters Chronicles".  It's "magic" time!
http://bit.ly/oViqt5

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@ True Masters Chronicles - thats some nice ninjitsu fight going on.  Taken cues from Naruto?
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MAG-ISA updates today:
http://www.drunkduck.com/MAG_ISA/5365737/
Lucia beats the living daylights out of Eman…

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@kyupol After reading earlier pages and the later pages, I see you improved a lot in your artwork.  I like how you made effects come out to like energy emitting out of one's body or the blurry effect when someone is hit.
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Today in Skooland, Castaways will be concluding with a part two coming sometime next year.  So that means Skooland will be on hiatus until further notice.  Five pages have been added and the last page is quite interesting.

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It's been longer than a year since i updated and i probably have lost 100% of my audience here but if anyone wants to check out some cartoons and maybe get a chuckle or 2 out of it, visit my Pep Squad link.
 
Sorry, i cannot comment on the previous person's cartoon because the link is not working.

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PEP SQUAD can be pretty funny.  I might be bias cuz I love football and the strip revolves around that premise so I dig the strip.  He can draw women pretty sexy in a cartoony Jessica Rabbit way.  Even though they're cheerleaders and people expect them to be dumb, Dave Mire makes them not dumb but not rocket scientists either.  They love what they do and have fun with it.  The product placement strip was nice.  They do whats expected of them and exploit themselves for a few laughs.  I wish all women were like the women in Pep Squad.
My book is called FILTHY DECADANTS and its a cross between Sonny Chiba's The Streetfighter, Escape from New York.  The synopsis: A ronin searches for her daughter after massive quakes decimate most of California.  Meanwhile, miscreants and the lowest of the low overtake what is left to create a new society where cannibalism and mayhem rule the land.  Its on sale at IndyPlanet but the preview is below.  an 8 page preview.  Its a bit gory but the comic does have soul.  Its got a universal theme that came from the heart.  Oh god thats cheesy.  But then that's why I threw in gore!
http://www.drunkduck.com/Filthy_Decadants_/

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@ Filthy Decadents - interesting premise so far.  I like the details and lineart.  Sometimes hands and perspective get screwed up but thats ok.  Colors could help.  I'm a fan of colored comics.  :)
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MAG-ISA
http://www.drunkduck.com/MAG_ISA/5366248/
Pretty straightforward update…  The pictures tell it all.  :)

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For Mag-Isa: Some pretty straightforward, to the point action! That looks like it HURT! Well done :) 

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Without Moonlight updated yesterday with our first glimpse into Martha's resistance group. 

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