I already commented on your page, Let me add I love the shading/coloring.. I mentioned it before, but I do admire it!
In my update of Steel and Manitou.. why.. the prologue is over! And mysterious forces are at work here. OhhOOOhhHh…
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First off, let me just say right off the bat that this comic is a lot better then I expected…
Now I can explain, I read your entire comic from first to latest and immediately I notice improvement as I went through the pages. This simply means this will get even better with age and I'm just noting the art style.
However, the concept isn't too too original (and don't get me wrong I mean what is these days) although despite that being said- it's still a very good read. Of course the comic is still young and I'm sure as time goes on it will be a gem. Personally, I think you're capturing something that has true potential and on a side note creating a tearjerker will certainly set spark on your comic.
⑊Heh. Was that too much?
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fromfinn wrote:Haha, not too much. (well, maybe a bit at first) I appreciate a brutally honest answer though, I think constructive criticsm is the best way to make a peice of work better. TBH I kind of just started this comic not really knowing what direction the story will take, so hopefully I can make something good from it.
First off, let me just say right off the bat that this comic is a lot better then I expected…
Now I can explain, I read your entire comic from first to latest and immediately I notice improvement as I went through the pages. This simply means this will get even better with age and I'm just noting the art style.
However, the concept isn't too too original (and don't get me wrong I mean what is these days) although despite that being said- it's still a very good read. Of course the comic is still young and I'm sure as time goes on it will be a gem. Personally, I think you're capturing something that has true potential and on a side note creating a tearjerker will certainly set spark on your comic.
⑊Heh. Was that too much?
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In this weeks ALONE TIME COMPASS,
the entity in question might be the first to realize who it might be.
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No comments for anyone else, just wanted to say thanks hehe ^^
That page has a good sense of energy to it. I also like the cover on the previous page.
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In Lore. Calisa and company arrive at the wayfarer's rest to plan their next move to elude their pursuers and possibly get some rest.
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It wasn't uncommon for slaveholders to keep a woman or several around as personal attendants with "French benefits," to shamelessly crib from M*A*S*H. Nice page.
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Nice to see that the Duck tradition of keeping thread necromancy at bay is alive and well.
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Nice page, it doesn't do anything dramatc , but it does push the story forward. looks good as always.
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In Lore we get a glimpse of two sets of characters. Gerard's fight comes to an abrupt conclusion and Calisa gives her crew the plan, such as it is.
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I'd probably do the same if I were chieftain.
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Nice black and white art.
In BASO I have posted the second page of a chapter that features some guest artists. This page is courtest of Banes. Harriet is put on the market.
https://next.theduckwebcomics.com/BASO/
I really like the use of breaking panels near the bottom of that page. It's not something I do nearly enough, but am going to try to fold into my own work in the future. That kind of work is always tricky; if you do it wrong, the reader can easily get lost. But it flows really well here.
It's one of those comics where I don't know what to think of it, but it is strangely compelling. good work.
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Im Lore Malandra may be in trouble.
https://next.theduckwebcomics.com/Lore/5480913/
I think you might've gone a little overboard with the motion blur, but other than that, it looks pretty good. That gate in the last panel doesn't seem to serve mugh of a purpose, though - there's no wall to stop someone from just walking around it.
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In this update of Frontier: 2170, lots of typing. Lots and lots of typing. This is never a good sign.
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"Are you sure it is this way?"
Thats what i ask when im going raid with my fellow clans..it didnt end well.
But these scene just makes me wanna install the game again and going questing with my buddies..ah good timess~
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In this chapter we are going to see where the magic girls go to be recruited..
and the girl transform!…And nudity!!…yea okay i lied on that last one just have a look.
I didn't feel it was fair to only look at the latest page since it's pretty much just title text/fonts. However lovely fonts of course! ;)
I went to the page beforehand to get some meat. I like your art! The freckled soon to be magical girl is cute and troubled mom with cast looks to be worried for sure! Keep it up!
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Fenny walking through the destruction left after the aliens in NYC.
I am in envy of your art style. Sketchy, but somehow clean at the same time, with great shading and use of color.
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You've got a strong grasp on contrast, the importance of which can't be overstated when it comes to monochromatic art! The decision to use traditional media also give the comic a nearly tangible texture that digital media struggles with. I'll be going through the archive for this comic, because I'm actually curious about what happened to give that poor woman such a hideous wound!
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In this update, we find out that modern technology can mesmerize ancient undead sorcerors like laser pointers mesmerize cats.
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Very nice coloring on the page! And anything demanding you HURRY to make a wish probably isn't going to be good after said wish is made!
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Fenny runs into the WORST pick up lines ever on the newest page of The Devon Legacy
It is a nice american comic, the effects and character illustration is just nice, And I like the drawings of the mecha. Well but if you can draw the robot that well, your buildings could be more better :)
Overall It is Nice, I will need more time and begin reading from the beginning to understand the plot :)
And here is mine, new to the duck webcomics
https://next.theduckwebcomics.com/The_Violet_Sun_fixed/5484576/
It is a story about a waging war, where the protagonist is trapped inside it, and becomes the victim of the war in forms of slavery. As the result, she seeks for vengeance, raising forces against the world itself. Although not yet illustrated fully like the synopis, because I haven't upload them all, just giving the time for the readers to read.
Violet Sun is a heavy action manga with outrageous battle effects, which is a must see for you action lovers :D. Note: It is a manga, read Right to Left
I'm not sure the page you uploaded when you commented is the same page I'm critiquing, but this is a pretty brutal cliffhanger. Even with the apparition appearing behind the characters making everything dark, there should be a better grounding of the characters. The perspective is just a little off. The darker skinned girl's arm is bent too far as well. I went back a couple pages and your grammar needs a little work.
I'm impressed at the volume of pages you had! I'd definitely suggest pacing your updates out a page every few days instead of all at once the next time you post. It'll give you more time on the front page over a few weeks so you can reach more people who maybe only visit on certain days! Keep up the work!
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The new chapter of Deadgil & Sue is helping my photoshop skills grow by leaps and bounds. https://next.theduckwebcomics.com/The_Afterlives_and_Misadventures_of_Deadgirl_and_Sue/5490955/ is the latest page.
You should visit for post-apocalyptic lesbian longing. Desolate Love is the adventure of Deadgirl searching the world and her past for the heart, mind, and essence of her love because a good friend whispered rumors of ressurrection.
That's a nice looking page and zombies always work for a bit of tension.
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